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Hikari Namikaze
Nova Corps
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Hikari Namikaze

Fame : 153
Home Village :
  • Star

Element(s) : Wind, Fire, Lightning
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eyes (V2), Chakra Chains
Ryo : 103600
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Sun Nov 19, 2017 1:54 am

Done


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Hikari Namikaze

Fame : 153
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Element(s) : Wind, Fire, Lightning
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eyes (V2), Chakra Chains
Ryo : 103600
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Sun Nov 19, 2017 12:50 pm

Finnaly changed the name


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Hikari Namikaze
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Hikari Namikaze

Fame : 153
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Element(s) : Wind, Fire, Lightning
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eyes (V2), Chakra Chains
Ryo : 103600
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Mon Nov 20, 2017 12:55 pm

Bump


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Risako Akara
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Tue Nov 21, 2017 4:38 am

Approved


Risako's Stats

@ TheInvincibleLegend : Risako is probably the manliest Ninja in Konoha.
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Hikari Namikaze
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Hikari Namikaze

Fame : 153
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Element(s) : Wind, Fire, Lightning
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eyes (V2), Chakra Chains
Ryo : 103600
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Tue Jan 30, 2018 11:18 am

So, made a few changes.        
1.    Removed the RT Debuff
So, Haru wanted this gone. I didn’t really see the problem with it, but it wasn’t the point of this jutsu, so I just went with it.
2.       Was more specific on how the blinding damage worked.
Made it more clear how the blinding effected people. Also, there was an argument that the first blinding didn’t have a save, so I made it clear it did.
3.       Made the explosion start one meter away from Hikari.
So, as the jutsu was at that point, it was unclear if the explosion was effected by the clothes Hikari was wearing. It didn’t damage her items because the explosion only effected people, but this just clears up the issue. Speaking of…..
4.       The jutsu now damages Items
Yeah….. That was an unintentional error on my part. My Bad.
5.       Made it Site Canon.

All Clans can use more Clan jutsu, so I figured I would do my part and make this open to all Akaris. 


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Kazuo Kemuri
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Tue Jan 30, 2018 11:25 am

Remove the site cannon, you can make it available to other Akari, but cannon status is just for cannon jutsu or jutsu made to emulate them. Bloodline jutsu status overrides cannon/custom anyways



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And I'll fear no evil, because I'm blind to it all
My mind and my blade, they comfort me
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Element(s) : Wind, Fire, Lightning
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eyes (V2), Chakra Chains
Ryo : 103600
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Tue Jan 30, 2018 11:33 am

Ok.... Attempted? (I Just put bloodline under canon or custom, I hope that is right.)
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Tue Jan 30, 2018 1:48 pm

I don't think you clarify what the effective area is. Is this around the user? In front of them? I suggest you clarify that the range is a diameter/radius.



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Hikari Namikaze

Fame : 153
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Element(s) : Wind, Fire, Lightning
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eyes (V2), Chakra Chains
Ryo : 103600
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Tue Jan 30, 2018 1:52 pm

Edits made


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Clan Element : Meiton
Bloodline : Meigan
Ryo : 20575
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton: Holy Sun   Tue Jan 30, 2018 1:56 pm

AP cost should technically be like 47, WC to learn should be like 4350. If you made the power 60, we could stick with the 45 AP cost and the WC cost can go to like 4250. You can be refunded the extra WC if that's important to you lol



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