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PostSubject: Mayfly   Wed Oct 11, 2017 9:01 pm

Name: Mayfly
Element: Wood
Rank: S
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory:


Appearance: User sinks/rises into/from the ground or plant life
Handseals: -
Duration: See below
Cooldown: Posts used + 1
Range: See below
Power: -
Speed: See below
Health: -
Stat Boosts:
What it does: The user can merge into ground and plant life and travel through them at enormously fast speeds. From wiki: “Using this technique he can conceal himself in such things as trees and even sand. Once merged, his presence is completely concealed, making it almost impossible to detect him, even for sensor type ninja like Karin (with the exception of intent sensory). This makes this technique perfect for close-ranged spying.” While merged, the user can still ”see” (but not hear, which would require partial emergence) around him as if he were standing on the ground directly above him. As a caveat, the user can only merge/travel through his own mokuton techniques, and cannot travel through other people's items or techniques. This technique has different uses:

In-combat short-range movement:
The user can merge into the ground and/or plant life at chakra-stat speed, and travel through the ground and/or plant life at a speed equal to their chakra stat. The user can, of course, remain in the ground for as long as he chooses, but the process of merging into the ground costs 100 AP each time it’s fully done. While merged, the user's health stat remains the same OR is reduced to 30, whichever is lower. Just as in canon, the user may partially emerge/submerge from the ground to observe, but this does not cost AP (however, the user must pay 30 AP per post to remain merged or partially merged). While in the ground, the user can initiate long-range movement as well (see below). Cannot emerge 1 meter or less from a person, and upon emerging, the user's equipment that he has contact with may not be within 1 meter of a person. Chakra cloaking is maintained even while partially merged, but while merged/partially merged, the user cannot laterally displace his body or cast other jutsu. Similarly, while partially merged, the user can be detected by pretty much any kind of sensory (ranging from Kyuubi intent sensory to normal vision) that's not chakra sensory. Should the portion of earth that the user is in be separated from the rest of the earth, he will not be able to teleport out should he remain in the partitioned area.  

Long-range movement:
The user can move across great distances to escape or travel, although this is much slower, this being at a speed of 100 (scaling, of course). Again, merging occurs at a speed of chakra stat, and merging costs 100 AP with a 30 AP upkeep per post merged thereafter. The user can use this to  travel across countries normally undetected, or travel (out of combat) to places where he has been before. To pinpoint a destination where someone might be, the user can now passively sense chakra signatures he has memorized on a global scale.




Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 8,000
Action Cost: 80 to merge, 30 upkeep
Mastery: N
Bonus Requirements:
Canon or Custom: Canon http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Mayfly


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Thu Oct 12, 2017 9:41 pm

Bump


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Fri Oct 13, 2017 10:58 pm

Bump


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Sun Oct 15, 2017 1:37 am

Bump.


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Mon Oct 16, 2017 2:59 pm

Edited, added a condition.


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Tue Oct 17, 2017 7:35 pm

Bump


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Wed Oct 18, 2017 8:24 pm

Bump!?!?!?!?!!


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Wed Oct 18, 2017 9:03 pm

@Kozai wrote:
The user can merge into the ground and/or plant life at 150 speed (scaling, of course)

No, you don't get 150 speed with scaling. Bring it down to 100 or make it chakra stat. 

@Kozai wrote:
Just as in canon, the user may partially emerge/submerge from the ground to observe, but this does not cost AP.

Clarify that the 30 AP upkeep still applies here.

@Kozai wrote:
Cannot emerge 1 meter or less from a person.

bc Andy's a cuck solid lad let's make this include that the user's equipment also cannot be within 1 meter of a person. 

@Kozai wrote:
 travel instantly

Please remove the no S/T teleportation

Also, if you would, state that you can't travel through other people's techniques or items. You can't use this tech to no-sell anything that comes your way. 

@Kozai wrote:
and travel through the ground and/or plant life at a speed equal to their reaction time. 

Speed of 100 or chakra stat or whatever, please. This isn't a teleport.

Also mention that you have to be able to fit into the plant/ground you're occupying to travel this way. What I mean by this is that you can't step on a leaf and suddenly T/P behind someone through it. 

This'll be a start.


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Wed Oct 18, 2017 10:34 pm

Explain to me why the numbers of this technique can't follow the normal teleport rules handed down to us by Yousei.


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PostSubject: Re: Mayfly   Wed Oct 18, 2017 11:39 pm

Edited.

Two points: 
1. What I meant by "travel instantly" isn't infinity speed, but rather the ability to not have to wait 24 hours, given that the travel speed is 100. You know, what we refer to as "insta-travel".

2. Protesting the "must fit into w/e you're merging into" clause, for reasons given on Skype. For any other mod who decides to take this over, in short, we see that the way the plant-to-ground travel occurs is that Zetsu merges and travels through a minuscule plant root. So, this would be contradictory to how the jutsu functions.


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