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PostSubject: Hydrogen Bomb   Sun Oct 01, 2017 8:34 pm

Name: Hydrogen Bomb
Element: Water.. Kinda but not really
Rank: S
Spec Type: Ninjutsu

Backstory: As he begins to understand himself more and more. Kyson studied his body and what it can do. Understands not only his weaknesses but what strengths he could get out of it. But he wanted to come up with something fresh and new. Not just any plain water jutsu with the use of his bloodline. But instead, use his bloodline in a more creative way. Instead of using it to create water jutsu, use it to extract the elements that make up water to create something new. Something with a bang..

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Handseals: None (Reason: Hozuki's use their bloodline tecniques with the water cells in their DNA. For example, the water gun tech is used by focusing the water from their body to their fingertips due to their Hydrification.)

Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 8 post
Range: 50 meters/100 meters
Power: Chakra stat; Wind=100
Speed: Chakra stat
Health: -
Stat Boosts: -


What it does: 

Its an explosion created with Hydrogen Isotopes from Kyson's cells. With the use of his Hydrification, its makes it easier for him to extract the Hydrogen atoms from the water that makes up his body. But water isn't actually in the explosion, he just uses his bloodline to make it easier to extract exactly what he needs.

By infusing Hydrogen with with his chakra, he is able to create a huge explosion that can cause massive damage. User uses both hands to creates a 1 meter sphere of condensed Hydrogen and chakra. The bomb is levitates 5 inches from the users hands as its being formed. The user can shoot the chakra bomb up to 30 meters away from them. Any further and it explodes automatically. But the User cannot control it at will, once its fired it cannot change course. The Chakra bomb can be exploded at will at the speed and power of Chakra stat. For a jutsu with so much concentration, the user is only able to make this bomb last 1 post. Anything after, they lose control of it and it dispels itself. 

When the explosion occurs, the blast radius of the actual explosion is 50 meters. It also creates a strong wind that blows at a power of 100 (speed is still chakra stat). The wind range is from the maximum blast radius to 100 meters (Since the blast radius is 50 meters, the wind starts from 50 meters and travels up to 100). Opponents will need a strength above 100 to withstand the strong wind or else they get blown away.  The wind blast will knock any targets into the air, sending them flying a number of meters equal to the power of the jutsu-the target's strength. Wind strength cannot be scaled.

(100) - (targets strength) = how many meters target flies back from the wind

By infusing this jutsu with Chakra, Kyson is able to control this jutsu so that the explosion doesn't affect nor injure him. But this jutsu can hurt enemies and allies. So it must be used carefully.

Character Specific: Kyson, can be taught
Wordcount to Learn: 8000
Action Cost: 150
Mastery: no
Bonus Requirements: Must know 5 Hydrification Techniques
Canon or Custom: Custom/Bloodline


Stats

Health: 40 (+25)
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 50
Speed: 100
Strength: 35




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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Tue Oct 03, 2017 12:12 am

Bump


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Health: 40 (+25)
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 50
Speed: 100
Strength: 35


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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Tue Oct 03, 2017 3:03 am



Okay, now that I've gotten the topical memes out of the way, let's get down to business.

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User uses both hands to creates a 1 meter sphere of condensed Hydrogen and chakra. When the explosion occurs, the blast radius of the actual explosion is 50 meters.

I think I see what you're going for here, but the devil is in the details. When does the explosion occur? How long does the 1 meter sphere last? Does he hold it like a rasengan? Can he throw it, or does it just go off in his hand?

No hand signs is balanced well enough by the extra AP cost, I'm fine with that for now.

Specify that the range of the wind blast is 100 meters.
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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Tue Oct 03, 2017 5:10 am

lmaooo, aint gone lie. That was funny, I was dying.

Edits:

When does the explosion occur? 

- I can detonate it at will.


How long does the 1 meter sphere last?

- User can only control it for 1 post or it dispels itself.


Does he hold it like a rasengan?

- More like it levitates 5 inches above both his hands. Like a baby spirit bomb.


Can he throw it, or does it just go off in his hand?

- I added I can shoot it up to 30 meters but can't change its course once its shot. 


Specify that the range of the wind blast is 100 meters.

- I added "The wind range is from the maximum blast radius to 100 meters (Since the blast radius is 50 meters, the wind starts from 50 meters and travels up to 100)."


Stats

Health: 40 (+25)
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 50
Speed: 100
Strength: 35


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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Tue Oct 03, 2017 4:51 pm

So, not gonna lie, 300 total meters of range is a lot. I would kinda prefer that you give this a one post charge time, where you hold your hands together and get the technique ready and whatnot. In exchange, you can bump the blast radius and wind blast by 25 (or whatever combination you prefer) so your total range is 400 meters.

You could of course up the duration, I'd say one post charge, and then you can fire it. When it collides with something, it detonates. Cooldown takes effect once the charge is finished. If you cancel the charge, no AP cost need be payed, but you still suffer the tech cooldown. 

You can bump down the cooldown down to 6 posts. 

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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Tue Oct 03, 2017 5:14 pm

Wait wait wait 300 meters? Lol. Sorry if my explanation wasn't clear. Basically the range of the entire jutsu is 100 meters. The first 50 meters is the actual explosion and the last 50 meters is the wind caused from the explosion.


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Chakra: 100
Stamina: 50
Speed: 100
Strength: 35


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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Wed Oct 04, 2017 6:17 pm

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Health: 40 (+25)
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 50
Speed: 100
Strength: 35


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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Fri Oct 06, 2017 6:14 am

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Health: 40 (+25)
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 50
Speed: 100
Strength: 35


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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Sat Oct 07, 2017 6:00 pm

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Health: 40 (+25)
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 50
Speed: 100
Strength: 35


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PostSubject: Re: Hydrogen Bomb   Tue Oct 10, 2017 10:40 pm

Alright, approved on watch because I'm noncommittal like that
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