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PostSubject: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Mon Sep 11, 2017 1:10 am

Name: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb
Element: Lightning
Rank: S
Spec Type: Ninjutsu


Backstory:
Komon Hyuuga created the ninjutsu Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb in an effort to convert the taijutsu technique palm revolving heaven into a lightning based defensive ninjutsu. To his surprise however he found that the jutsu offered him offensive capabilities as well.

Appearance:
Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb has a visual appearance that pretty much exactly resembles the famous hyuuga technique palm revolving heaven, the only difference is it has sporadic crackles of electricity surrounding the defensive sphere, and when used for offensive purposes, a large amount of sharp electric needles will be sprayed in a direction of the users choice

Handseals: Boar, Tiger, Ram (for shield) Boar again (for nail bomb)
Duration:  up to 3 posts
Cooldown:  6 posts
Range: Shield is 3 meter radius, Nail bomb is 20 meter radius
Power: Chakra Stat
Speed: Chakra Stat
Health: Chakra Stat
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does:
Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb is a defensive jutsu meant to work almost exactly like palm revolving heaven. The only real difference is the activation, while palm revolving heaven was a taijutsu and required the user to spin to create the force field, this is a ninjutsu and requires hand signs in the place of spinning.

The Shield
The first and main use of the jutsu is to shield the user from harm, by weaving the signs boar tiger ram the user will begin the activation of a rotating sphere of electricity 3 meters in all directions with them at the center. This sphere will not cut into the ground so it does not protect them from beneath, but it does move with them as they walk. The sphere forms at the speed power and health of the jutsu once the user has finished the three seals. This jutsu is notably more powerful than palm revolving heaven due to the applied lightning nature.

The Nail Bomb
The lightning nature of the technique also added another useful feature, and is the reason the jutsu was given its name. If the user weaves the boar sign  again they will activate the immediate ejection of the lightning swirling around their jutsu, this lightning is ejected in the form of 100 lightning needles. They fly off of the shield covering 1/4th of the sphere, this 1/4th is decided by the user upon release, for instance he can choose to eject them to the side, behind or in front of him. These needles are about 2 inches long and only a few centimeters thick. The needles move at a speed and power of the jutsu and have a maximum range of 20 meters in a direction of the users choice. if the user uses the nail bomb portion of this technique the shield will deactivate itself immediately after.

Note : If the user masters this with no handseals they will still need to use the boar hand seal to activate the nail bomb portion of the technique.

Character Specific: Komon and those he teaches
Wordcount to learn: 8000 
Action Cost: 100 (shield) 50 for upkeep, 50 (nailbomb)
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Byakugan or Hyuuga Clan| Palm Revolving Heaven | Lightning Primary |
Canon or Custom: Custom


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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Tue Sep 12, 2017 7:04 pm

Bloodline techs take bloodline slots first and only if you don't have enough would they take custom/canon.

Does the dome just "form" at jutsu speed or does it also expand outwardly from the user?

50m is too much. Lower it to 20m.

Put cooldown at 5 posts.

Would the sphere destroy everything within range? You say it goes below the ground so I am pointing out it would create a hole.

And lastly, either give this a few more handseals or make the user spin in place unable to take other actions while this is active.


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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Sun Sep 17, 2017 6:36 pm

Edited to give it 3 handseals / 20 meter radius / and changed it so that the dome didn't form into the ground and begins forming 3 meters away from the user.
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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:24 pm

I'm sorry but seal of confrontation is only half a handseal in my books, make it something else or make the user hold it while the jutsu is active.

The wording confuses me a bit. The 3 meter radius dome acts like a shell, correct? It does not apply force inside of it, only on the surface, yes? If so, make it more apparent, please.

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The jutsu also creates a ring that is unleashed on the post its activated that expands from the dome and outwards to a maximum of a 20 degree radius.
Correct this.

Will the dome and the ring move with the user? Can the user leave the dome or would the dome damage the user like anything else?
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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Sun Oct 01, 2017 7:36 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Mon Oct 02, 2017 9:34 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Tue Oct 03, 2017 6:20 am

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In order for the jutsu to stay active the user must maintain the seal of confrontation, unless they have mastered the jutsu in which case no hand seals are necessary.

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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Fri Oct 06, 2017 3:03 am

Alright so I pretty much turned this into a very different jutsu because I like this idea better. Ready for review again
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PostSubject: Re: Eight Trigrams: Nail Bomb   Sat Oct 07, 2017 7:44 pm

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