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 Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)

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PostSubject: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sat Sep 02, 2017 9:06 am

Name: Spirit Wave
Element:
Rank: C
Spec Type: Medical
Backstory: During the eruption, and the chaos that ensued after it, many clans returned to the fighting and destruction that had come about in ages past. The Uzumaki clan wasn't spared from this, and developed many Juinjutsu and Fuinjutsu that were used to defend the clan and make the people stronger. However, some in the clan believed in a more pure way to boost their prowess through medical jutsu and the support of others. It was in this belief that the Spirit Wave technique was created. By borrowing anothers power to create a renewing source of energy inside themselves, the Uzumaki Medical Ninja were able to perform great feats of healing and combat.


Appearance: Chakra leaking out of the persons body, typically a mix of the users and the donators chakra color.
Handseals: Dragon -> Snake
Duration: 6 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Range: Self
Power:
Speed: 20 (Creation process only)
Health:
Stat Boosts: +20 to two main stats, not including Stamina. [Whatever stats chosen are set. To reset them a User must do 1,000 WC of re-aligning their donors chakra}
What it does: The user must have a willing participant as this jutsu requires a second source of chakra. Using a chakra absorption technique, they must create a pathway through their body, draining the donors chakra, passing it through the users body, and forming it into a ball of energy in their hand. This process will take 40 ap from them as it takes their chakra, and leaves the user with a large glowing orb of the donors chakra. The user must then absorb that chakra into their body, bonding with it and making it into a massive source of energy they can draw on to increase their abilities past what they are normally capable of. The process of absorption is agonizingly painful, and can leave the user just as crippled as the donor until the foreign chakra fully integrates with their body.




The technique, when active, also has a passive healing effect. Any scrapes, bruises or shallow cuts will heal every other post that this technique is active, though it is far too weak to heal any major wounds.


The chakra absorption only need be done once, as once the donors chakra is inside the users body it will constantly and passively renew itself, and can be called upon by using the handseals specified. Even still, this technique takes even more time to master, as they are limited to the amount of the foreign chakra they can call upon at any given time.


Clarifications:
The Sphere only has to be created once ever. Once absorbed it is permanently inside the user to be called upon with the aforementioned hand seals. This jutsu will be required for the 60% and 100% Variants to the jutsu.
Chakra donors AP is not permanently gone and will be restored with normal rest or ending the topic.


Character Specific: Uzumaki Clan
Wordcount to learn: 2,000
Action Cost: 20 activation/10 Upkeep
Mastery: N
Bonus Requirements:  Uzumaki Longevity (Full Version)
Canon or Custom: Uzumaki Site Canon


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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sun Sep 03, 2017 4:13 pm

Hi Kiru, at the moment the effect of this jutsu makes it an A rank as you're getting +40 stats.

If you bump it down to B rank it'll be +30 stats.

But if you'd like to keep it at C rank it'll only be +20 total stats.

Let me know what you choose and edit accordingly.


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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sun Sep 03, 2017 6:43 pm

Since when have boosters worked that way? By that logic
Water Trident
Wind Glaive
Earth Spear
Lightning Javelin
Quick Draw
Bo style jab
and maybe even
Flicker Movement

Are all over the stat limit as well. Not to mention this is a limited clan. Wheres muh privilege!!11!!


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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sun Sep 03, 2017 8:31 pm

Wow that was my bad, I have no clue what I was thinking when I wrote that.

I'm still a bit unclear on what this does. To me it seems like you drain someone's whole AP reserve (no matter how much they have) In exchange for 40 stats. Is that correct?




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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sun Sep 03, 2017 8:41 pm

Not exactly?

You drain most of their AP
*willingly given
To create a Sphere of Energy to implant in yourself as sort of a inner energy you can call on, sort of like a bijuu but not a crazy evil monster and just a bit of energy.

At this stage, you can't call on very much of it as your Chakra and this foreign body of chakra don't mix well, and you end up burning through it whithout gaining much from it. Fortunately, through Uzumaki secret technique magics, the inner energy will regen on its own.

So basically imagine a bijuu.
now take away it being a monster
annnd the chakra cloak
aaaaaannnnnnnddd being able to combo it with another booster

and you get this technique! Kinda! I guess?


Edit:
added some clarification about the sphere of energy I hope


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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Mon Sep 04, 2017 5:30 pm

Ok I'm starting to see it more clearly.

Instead of just taking all of someone's ap down to 1, I'd rather see a hard number on this. So this way you don't get the same effect from someone with 10 ap than you do with someone who has 1000. Im open to suggestions on what number you think is good but I'll suggest 40 ap is taken in the process.

And also since this is a long process (abasorbing chakra, pulling the sphere, absorbing the sphere) let's throw a speed stat on there. Standard speed stat for C ranks would work there.


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Speed: 100 (+25)

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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sun Sep 24, 2017 5:46 pm

Are you still working on this Kiru?


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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sat Sep 30, 2017 10:50 pm

Yes! Was just absent for a while!


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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sat Sep 30, 2017 11:44 pm

I could add the edits but I just don't see a reason for a few of them.

1. The reason why I have it go to one is you are absorbing someones chakra to a massive point to create your own infinite energy source. The amount of AP the other party drops to doesn't fully matter, simply because it won't affect the stats of the booster.

2. For the speed stat, I believe its unnecessary because the user of the jutsu only does the absorption process once, and it has to be a willing participant. Doing this in battle would be outright stupid as whatever ally you drained would be killed almost immediately.

3. The absorption/energy creation is only done once. Past that point the user activates with handseals and draws on the energy. However there will be upgraded versions of this technique to use the foreign energy more efficiently and get used to it. This is another reason of it dropping someones AP to 1, because the user is taking far more then they can use (at this level)


as I said, i'll make the edits if you really want me to, but they seem almost unnecessary to me personally with the manner this will likely be trained.


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PostSubject: Re: Uzumaki Secret Technique: Spirit Wave (30%)   Sat Sep 30, 2017 11:53 pm

I still want a set number, as this is weaker than the 60% and the 100% versions will be. So it wouldn't make much sense for the next techs to take the same amount of energy but still be able to do the same thing. Plus this is a C rank, taking that much ap is far too powerful. 

While doing this in battle could be illogical it is still a possibility and thus I still want a speed stat.


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