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Nobunaga
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Fame : 6
Home Village :
  • Sand

Element(s) : Lightning, Wind, Earth
Clan : Hiyu
Bloodline : Tai no Hengen
Ryo : 6750
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PostSubject: Bolt   Sat Aug 12, 2017 1:36 am

NameBolt
ElementLightning
RankS
Spec TypeNinjutsu
BackstoryNobunaga was never the fastest shinobi and as a shinobi who preferred close range, hand to hand and weaponry styled combat, his lack of speed was not ideal. Especially when fighting shinobi that specialised in Genjutsu and the use of long ranged ninjutsu, he often found himself at a disadvantage. Jutsus like body flicker just wouldnt cut it and even with the use of speed enhancement jutsus, others who were already faster had speed enhancement jutsus of their own as well. Thus with the aid of his Kekki Genkai Nobunaga created this powerful technique, a technique that would allow him to travel amazingly fast to swiftly close the gap between him and his enemies.

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HandsealsSnake - Monkey - Boar - Tiger
Duration1 Post
Cooldown2 Post short range / 3 posts long range
Range50/Infinite
Power-
SpeedRT/70
Health-
What it does Nobunaga funnels lightning chakra into every cell of both his entire body and everything he is in contact with. Absorbing the lightning chakra into his body Nobunaga super charges his cells and the cells of the things he's in contact with with, essentially turning them into lighting. Once this state is achieved, he can shoot himself as a lighting bolt to swiftly transport himself. There are two ways Nobunaga can transport himself once taking the form of a fast moving lighting bolt. The first is short range transportation, where he can transport himself to anything he can see within a 50 meter radius of his current position at a speed of his reaction time. The second is a long range form of transportation where he moves at a speed of 70 and can transport himself anywhere as long as he has been there before. The short range transportation is a quick moving lighting bolt that goes where Nobunaga wants to while the long range transportation is achieved by shooting himself into the sky and then shooting down where he wants to arrive.

While transporting himself as a lighting bolt, Nobunaga will arrive at his destination in the exact same position he left. Therefore he cannot move his body or perform any actions while the transportation is occurring. However once he arrives at his destination anything he was doing before hand will continue. For example, if he was starting a front kick, then transported, upon arrival the same force, movement, inertia, kinetic energy etc that his kick would have had if he had never transported himself would be applied after the transportation is completed.

Nobunaga cannot transport himself through or into objects with this nor can he transport himself into or onto people. During the transportation he cannot come into contact with someone else. Only once transportation is completed and he has fully appeared can he make contact with another individual. He can transport up to two other people with him and anything they are carrying for an additional cost of 30 AP each.

Character SpecificNobunaga and those he teaches
Wordcount5000
Action Cost50
MasteryYes
Bonus RequirementsLighting element, 2 B-rank+ lighting Ninjutsu, Tai no Hengen
Canon or CustomCustom 


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Element(s) : Water
Clan : Meijin
Clan Element : Water
Bloodline : The Meijin "Disease"
Ryo : 13000
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PostSubject: Re: Bolt   Sun Aug 13, 2017 12:21 am

Hello Nobunga, I'll be looking at this.

First: Let's drop the short range to 50 meteres. 

Second: "instantaneously transport himself" since it's at RT or 70 speed I'd like that to be changed.

Third: We need to clarify the short range teleportation a bit, add a line about how you may only teleport to something you can physically see. Also, let's prevent you from teleporting on top of people by adding a line that you may only teleport within 2 meters of another person.

Fourth: For long range teleportation, please add that nobunga can only teleport to somewhere he has been before as per teleportation rules.

Fifth: Since this technique essentially shows how you have mastered the lighting element, let's add to the bonus requirements by saying "two B rank or higher lighting techniques."

That's all I have for you right now, please bump when finished and I'll take another look.


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Quick Stats:

Health: 30 (+ 15)

Chakra: 100

Stamina: 50 (+ 49 AP)

Speed: 100 (+25)

Strength: 45
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Fame : 6
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Lightning, Wind, Earth
Clan : Hiyu
Bloodline : Tai no Hengen
Ryo : 6750
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PostSubject: Re: Bolt   Sun Aug 13, 2017 5:00 pm

Made all the asked edits except for the third. I did add that I cannot transport into or onto a person, I was suppose to put that in originally but guess I forgot. However adding a 2 meters distance sort of defeats the purpose of the jutsu. Its meant to swiftly close the gap between him and his target, adding a 2 meter distance still leaves a gap between the two that he'd have to close to engage in hand to hand combat. I wrote that he cannot touch someone during the transportation but I guess to avoid issues of transporting myself within millimetres of someone, a distance is required. So could I have it reduced to 1 meter from the person?
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Clan Element : Water
Bloodline : The Meijin "Disease"
Ryo : 13000
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PostSubject: Re: Bolt   Sun Aug 13, 2017 8:30 pm

I'm ok with you reducing it to 1 meter. 

I also have some more changes though.

1. Since long distance would take more energy, let's bump long range AP to 100. 

2. I'll give you two options for the next part:

A: If you want RT speed then cooldown will have to be 5 posts and wc requirement will be 8k

B: drop speed down to speed stat and you can make the cooldown 3 posts and make the wc 6k

3. Teleporting with people needs to be slower and have a requirement. I'm thinking 1 posts while in contact with a person before you're able to teleport people and teleportation with people happens at a speed of 50.

If you have any questions or concerns with any of that just let me know.


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Health: 30 (+ 15)

Chakra: 100

Stamina: 50 (+ 49 AP)

Speed: 100 (+25)

Strength: 45
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