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 Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)

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Clan : Kaguya
Bloodline : Shikotsumyaku
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PostSubject: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Thu Aug 10, 2017 6:31 am

Name: Bone Sword (Hone no ken)
Element: None
Rank: D
Spec Type: Taijutsu
Backstory: -


Appearance: Described in Effect
Hand seals: -
Duration: 4 Posts
Cool down: When broken 3 Posts
Range: 1m blade
Power: 10
Speed: -
Health: 10
Stat Boosts: -
What it does:

The user of this jutsu pulls out his left or right arm bone that while he is doing so grows back. It will take the form of a pointy blade of about 1m length. It can be used as a rapier and has the durability and sharpness equal to the user's strength+health/2 and can be used until it is destroyed or decayed. The depleat reduces the weapons health and therefore sharpness by a quarter every post:
P1: 100/ P2: 75/ P3: 50/ P4: 25 and then it breaks.


Character Specific: -
Wordcount to learn: 1000
Action Cost: 10
Mastery: -
Bonus Requirements: Kaguya Clan - Shikotsumyaku
Canon or Custom: Related to Canon



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"If I were assured of your eventual destruction I would, in the interests of the public, cheerfully accept my own."
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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Thu Aug 10, 2017 8:02 am

Change cool down to 5 posts, if broken before 5 posts then it is amount of posts used.


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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Thu Aug 10, 2017 9:20 am

done but can you tell me what is the system behind it?



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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Thu Aug 10, 2017 12:31 pm

There is t really a system behind it unfortunately, it's a way of ensuring s tech isn't broken/op. Also I apologize I should have caught this in my first run through but I was tired. Mastery will have to be a no, because you don't have any hand signs (as that makes complete sense with this tech) and you'd be able to give yourself a +40 Health to it eventually. So yea I apologize on making this take longer but please change mastery to a No, and then all will be well


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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Thu Aug 10, 2017 1:49 pm

Okay I'll do that but while I do that bear with me for a moment here.

Originally I wanted it to be 1 Post after it is broken (to ensure that there is o one just throwng around swords like hell)

You are suggesting:
If it breaks in the 1st post, I have 1 Post cooldown.
If it breaks in the 2nd post, I have 2 Posts cooldown.
If it breaks in the 3rd post, I have 3 Posts cooldown.
If it breaks in the 4th post, I have 4 Posts cooldown.
If it breaks in the 5th post, I have 5 Posts cooldown and so on.

So the longer I use it at first, the longer I have to wait to do it again. This actually does not make any sense to me.
If it was a technique that I was continually putting chakra into this would totally make sens because I would be exhausted holding it up 5 Posts. So after that having to not use it for 5 Posts makes perfekt sense.

But while creating that sword I do use chakra only while creating it, so the time after creating it should be the time I need to wait longer after. So if you insist on a leveled cooldown I would decrease it from 5 Posts if it breaks in the frist post after creating it going down until reaching the minimum of 1 Post after I have used it for a while, because in that time the bones should have recovered their usual hardeness.



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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Fri Aug 11, 2017 11:36 pm

Your argument makes perfects sense so how about this:

Cool down will be amount of posts used, maxes at 3 posts. So the cool down will never exceed three posts, so if you use it and it breaks after 8 posts cool down is 3 posts. Does this sound like a fair compromise?


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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Sat Aug 12, 2017 12:41 am

but this is what I critizied i the first place.
Let's just make it 3 Posts when ever because let's just walk it again.
More cooldown the longer it is used does not make sense, because using it quickly again after just using it should be harder than using it after a while of waiting or using it.
I do not mind the cooldown, I just want it to have a logical reason.

If I pull it out the bones grow back. After the bones grow back you have to wait until the bones have been infused with chakra again to use them. This takes more time shortly after being used than when the bones have had time to grow. And all this technique does is creating a sword out of bones. Nothing more to it.



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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Sat Aug 12, 2017 1:02 am

Okay fine 3 post cool down make your edit and I'll approve


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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Sat Aug 12, 2017 6:25 am

Thank you and sorry for the inconvinience ♥



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PostSubject: Re: Bone Sword (Hone no Ken)   Sat Aug 12, 2017 6:52 am

Approved


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