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Tenshi Hiyu
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Element(s) : Lightning
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Bloodline : Tai no Hegen
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PostSubject: Yoshida, Tenshi    Thu Jun 15, 2017 5:13 pm

Yoshida,Tenshi 



Basic Information


Age:12
Birthday:08/28
Gender:Male
Appearance:Tenshi Is an above average height male, his body almost mimicking his height giving him an above average stature.Wanting to be a stalwart protector almost made his body fit the bill. His body lean with muscle is almost a beauty to behold.His eyes glow with a sparkling amber color almost as looking into his eyes is like viewing the sun. His hair flows down past his shoulder blades being a ghostly white color. His harsh childhood gave him scars to remember his growth by. The most notable: A vicious dog he ran into while running in the forest gave him a horizontal scar on his left cheek, An angered drunk father with a candle gave him burn marks across the top of his shoulders that ended up healing like the pattern on a zebra's hide, and finally a devilish fox mark on his left shoulder blade from his encounter with the chest.

Fashion wise Tenshi tends to try to match his outfits with his hair and eye color. Wearing white robes accented with goldish yellow markings, a pair of grey pants, and a pair of grey skintight shoes to match with his pants. He doesn't seem to change his fashion much but when he does he tries to keep to the white and yellow color trend. The only thing that doesn't seem to change is a pair of armored gloves he wears to help him handle his blades more safely.
 Height: 5'8
Weight:145 pounds
Personality: Tenshi more of an aggressor. Over his years as a child being beaten by his step father caused him to feel inadequate. This caused him to be constantly angry and passive agresive.He doesn't  believe in respect and manners as he wished he received even the slightest from his step father. This causes him to try to act in a mature chivalrous manner, though at the same time coming off as very rude and stubborn.

Being  young man Tenshi still has some growing up to do, even while acting maturely. He often finds it hard to keep his mouth shut. Sometimes this does seem to cause him some grief and places him in bad situations. Tenshi doesn't have a problem solving a issue through violence, infact he encourages the behavior.

Tenshi doesn't like the idea of being alone, since the beast inside him constantly curse his name and tries to change his actions. The beast being different personality that Tenshi had when angry.  In order for him to find some piece he enjoys training his body to the full extent. It allows him to express his anger and is a nice therapy for him.


History: Not much to note about Tenshi's history. His mother died while giving birth, leaving him and his father. They lived in a hut somewhere. Tenshi's dad fell in a deep depression once his wife had died. Blaming Tenshi every chance he got becusse of it. The two of them had a destructive relationship and by the looks of it, it will never be fixed. The two of them wandered around for four years before arriving at Hoshi. Ever since he was four,  Tenshi remembers him and his father wandering around becuase they had lost their home. Despite their terrible relationship, Tenshi's father did a good job providing food and shelter. He used to hunt, using chakra. At the time, Tenshi didnt know what it was, and when he asked his father about it, the man would strike him across the face. Their journey took them to the newly established Hoshi where they settled down. They got themselves a house, and Tenshi's father went to work for the royal family, in order to make money for them.

When not home, Tenshi could be found somewhere in the village hanging with some things. Street civilians that didn't have much in their own life and only knew one thing... and that was to steal. Tenshi wasn't exactly friends with these thugs, nor were they friends with him. Tenshi was given a order, like to rob the womans purse, he would do it, then he would be given a small amount of change. This went on for a few years actually, to those on the outside it seemed like they are a group of young kids with not much to do. Tenshi himself never partaked in the serious crimes they committed. Ironically enough Tenshi had never been caught himself, but the day when a officer on the police force, Tenshi ran away before anyone noticed, ane never did he see the thugs again. The young adolescent decided it was time to become a Shinobi afterward. Convincing his father to enroll him. 

Tenshi enrolled in the academy at the age of eight. Throughout his academy days, Tenshi had a tough time making friends. Although he knew the kids from growing up in Hoshi with some of them, he didn't necessarily have any friends. Some viewed Tenshi as a bully due to the fact he constantly beat up kids. Due to no positve reinforcement at home, Tenshi behavior never faltered. Though he would only beat a kid up if they disrespected him first. Such as, calling him names due to his height, since it's always been on the taller side.  Tenshi realized how the village operated soon enough.

Likes: Fighting,Hot Foods, and hot girls
Dislikes: Books, Oatmeal, and Religion


Ninja Traits


Rank: Academy Student 
Village: Hoshi
Element(s): Lightning
Specialties: 
Clan:Hiyu
Bijuu Request: 


Stats


Health:5
Chakra:5
Stamina:5
Speed:10
Strength:5


The Player


Other Characters:N/A
Roleplay:Tenshi was sitting idly in a tree when a nearby caravan, hit a rock and its wheel rolled off. The man driving the caravan got out of it shockingly upset about the event and expressed great worry as he strutted back and forth. "What will I do, oh no, late I'm late, oh dear" Tenshi looked at the man and tilted his head staring at the caravan. He then decided to help, he put his sword around his shoulder and jumped down the tree branches till he was face to face with the man. The man screamed bloody murder at the sight of the boy as Tenshi's hair wasn't tied up and it was all hanging in front of his face like a demonic thief. Only his eyes were visible through the strands. 

Tenshi quickly tied his hair in a pony tail and smiled assuring the man he was polite and a helper. As he tried to help the man tie the wheel on the caravan. A bandit came out of the bushes and landed on the trail facing the two. "Gimme the items and no one gets killed!". The man quickly got behind Tenshi , and Tenshi's eyebrows slowly dropped in anger. "I hate thieves, and I surely hate killers. I suggest you be on your way or justice will bestowed upon you." The bandit laughed as he pushed the kid out of the way and went after the man. Tenshi  did not like seeing people in danger, and he reached behind his head unsheathing his katana. The schwing sound as it came forward caused the bandit to turn around. "So you wanna go? Let's dance kiddy" The man jumped at Tenshi in an attempt to tackle him down.

Tenshi  thought quickly, time stopped in his eyes, the man was paused in the air, in the state in time it was as if he could only see one way out. Tenshi  had to go against his beliefs, he had to kill. The bandit was just a lowly bandit probably less than a academy student, perfect opportunity. Tenshi  rolled forward under where he though the bandit would land, and thrust his sword up. Looking down he saw blood dropping down his fingertips. The sheer weight of the bandit had caused the katana to go more than a foot deep, enough to pierce a lung. As the main gasped for air, Tenshi  grossed out by the blood turned the guy over and stepped on his chest pulling the sword out. He cringed as it went through each layer. He could feel its slippery exterior rubbing first through the skin, then the rib cage scratching, then the lung, the other side of the cage, and lastly the skin. He looked at the man getting out of the caravan. "Y-Y-You killed him..." Tenshi  shed a tear looking at the bandit on the floor. "I defended against him...There's a difference."

The two started quickly repairing the caravan's wheel until they had finished and it was able to roll again. The man tilted his head and put his hand on the boy's shoulder. "Thank you, I know it must have been hard to do what you did, but because of you and what you did today, all these children will be saved", he said as he opened the caravan's tarp revealing shelves and shelves of medicinal supplies. "If you ever need anything, I am in your debt." Tenshi  smiled realizing he had done an extremely good deed, the man who he now realized is a care package shipper, will be able to help those in need.

"By saving those who need to be saved we both are doing our part, it is people like you, who give Shinobi like me a reason to look to the future. Have a good life, sir" He said reverting back to the trees as the caravan went upon it's way
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:49 pm

Coding: Please fix the coding to match what the character app shows. 

Appearance: What is a Yumi?

Personality: You reference the beast inside him here, can you please explain what this is? Is it an alternate personality, etc.

History: Okay what is this thing in the chest? There are no Bijuu available, and no 'demons' or anything of the like. You may need to change this, as it doesnt fall in line with the site. Your history is also inconsistent, before the picture of the box you note that your mother dies and after that your father becomes abusive. But in the words following the picture your mother is alive and your father is abusive in it. Please expand on this. Also expand on where you were born (was it in Konoha?). If so please mention how your character feels about the fact that Konoha's ally Suna was just recently taken over. What have his academy years been like so far? What has he done if he is only just entering the academy now, as a 14 year old? How was his years in basic elementary schools does he have any friends from them etc. 

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Sat Jun 17, 2017 12:56 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Sun Jun 18, 2017 4:10 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:39 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Mon Jun 19, 2017 10:40 pm


Alright so your history might need a little work. You see, Hoshi is a very recent shinobi village. The Ninja academy has only existed for about two years and before that, the population regarded shinobi as evil, even going so far as to toss out children who showed signs of chakra. Haven is headed by its royal family which is now aided by a relatively new shinobi force. You'll need to edit your history and academy age accordingly. <3


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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Tue Jun 20, 2017 2:17 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshida, Tenshi    Thu Jun 22, 2017 4:04 am

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