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PostSubject: Neah Kaguya Done   Tue Jun 13, 2017 3:46 am

Neah Kaguya


Basic Information


Age: 8 
Birthday: 12/26
Gender: Male
Appearance: Neah is a slender looking boy though he may not look it he is quite well toned body He has medium-length White hair and silver colored eyes. He stands at a height of four foot two inches and weighs a around 55 pounds. Neah has a lean, muscular physique. He has some muscle to his body but most people just think hes looks like a weakling, but underneath his shirt his chest and abdomen are the only thing that show that he is really physically in great shape. Though he is not the specimen of perfection. He was born with a small conclave chest the size of a spoon could fit into. He is usually seen wearing a black vest with gold buttons along with a white dress shirt as well as a red string tie with a pair of black pants and black leather dress shoes. He owns a long white trench coat it was the last gift he had received from his father after becoming a academy student and he never takes it off. The coat is to him a very precious treasure and will only take it off to bath,eat or sleep. The coat is made from a fine leather and has a adjustable belt around the waist. Neah's tends to wear mostly simple clothing almost like that of a farmers child, he has a pair of black suspender pants that he wears when he is out being casual. Though he changes into his better looking attire when he is out on a mission.
Personality:Neah has a kind and caring personality. He is also very generous. He also is somewhat private about his life. Though he tends to open up to people he trusts. He is also a determined type who will never back down. Neah is also a very compassionate person. Neah is kind and caring especially to children and the elderly. He is usually seen helping elderly people with their bags or helping maintain their gardens and lawns. Neah is private about himself because he doesn't want people to think that he is weird for being a ninja but also is a musician. His determination is a part of him its part of his nindo to never give up in training and in a fight.  Neah is the type of person who loves meeting new people, having friendly competitions with them or his friends,

Neah like everyone else gets angry and upset though there are a few certain things that will really get under his skin. Such as disrespecting his father and family or hurting one of his friends. If a person should dare harm one of his friends he will do what they did to his friend and will not stop until justice has been given. He is a very loyal to his country and his fellow shinobi. Even the thought of betraying his country would put him into a furious state or even be offered it. He wishes to become a shinobi of respect and honor  and strength one that the village views as a shinobi of worth. Though he may act goofy and care free when it comes to battle or serious matters he becomes serious and some some would consider him cold and analytical.
History: Neah was born on the eve of the 25th of December, His mother was a traveling Musician. Where as his father was a Shinobi from the  From the Mist village named Mugen Kaguya. Neah's Mother was known through out the five great countries as a prodigy and a musical genius. Though his mother had stopped traveling and decided to stay in the Mist when she met Neah's father. It was love at first sight for Neah's parents. From the moment they met and laid eyes on each other they were almost inseparable. 

His mother was in labor for over 12 agonizing hours.Sadly Neah's mother passed away but she got to name him before she passed away. Neah came out screaming like a banshee like every baby does when they're first born. His father was still in shock at the loss of his wife that he failed to notice the the new life before him. The nurses had finished cleaning up the new born baby Neah. The nurses handed the new born baby Neah to his father as they covered the body of Neah's mother up. After a while Neah's father finally noticed his new born son in his arms. Neah's father cried tears of both joy and sadness at the loss of his wife's love and the birth of his very first son.

Over the next few years Neah's father took care of him. Neah's father still deeply missed his wife but he still had his son so in a way he still had a part of her still. Even as a baby Neah would always crawl towards his fathers instruments. Neah's father would always crack a big grin at that and scoop up the infant Neah just before he touched any of his mothers instruments, Neah's father would always say after he picked him up "your gonna make a fine musician someday son and a fine shinobi. When he turned 5 his father began training Neah on how to read music. Neah was a quick study while studying on learning to read music. His father started Neah off with the piano for his sons first instrument. Neah took to the piano like a duck to water his father said. When not teaching Him about music his father would train his son about how to be a shinobi from molding chakra to learning about tracking.

At the age of 8 Neah joined the ninja academy. He showed a aptitude for ninjutsu skills. Over the time at the academy he was mostly shunned by the other student because he looked different and acted different from everyone else. Neah mostly thought of music when he should be paying attention to his his lessons. Though tragedy would later befall neah shortly after his arrival at the academy.  As his father had died during a mission. Though technically Neah was a adult in the eyes of the clan he was still a child at heart and the pain devastated him greatly. He was then adopted by the hyuuga plans they took pity upon the boy. His father had been friends with the hyuugas head of the family.

Likes:Music, learning new jutsu, training, making friends,meat

Dislikes:Anyone who gets in his way, Being kept waiting,Enemies of kirigakure, beans, being underestimated


Ninja Traits


Rank: E
Village:  Kirigakure
Element(s): Earth
Specialties: None for E rank
Clan: Kaguya
Bijuu Request: No

Stats


Health:25 (orginally 5 but plus 20 due to clan)
Chakra: 10
Stamina:5
Speed:5
Strength:5

The Player


Other Characters: none
Roleplay Sample: Neah lay facing down in his bed his covers all crumpled together and wrapped around him. the alarm clock next to him was ringing loudly as he stirred from a deep sleep. Neah had been dreaming about his parents about what his life would be like if he had them still. He didn't want to wake up from the pleasant dream but he knew he had to. He slapped down on the alarm clock and shut it off as yawned and smacked his lips a few times. He crawled out of bed and shuffled his way to his bathroom and used the toilet and started cleaning himself up. Fifteen minutes later Neah emerged from his bathroom clean and semi awake as he crossed his bedroom towards his closet. he grabbed his normal attire and headed downstairs.


His normal attire consisted of a long white trench coat, white shirt with a black vest with gold buttons. He carefully buttoned his vest and grabbed his red string tie and tied it around his collar. He pressed out his black pants with an iron slowly until all the creases were out, He reached down into his closet and pulled out a pair of his black ninja sandals and slipped them on.  As he emerged fully clothed he saw a bird rapping against his window. He quirked his head to the side and opened it and extened his arm and the bird landed on it and extendd his leg. A small scroll was attached to it he unrolled it and read it stating there was s ituation within the village and any and all shinobi avaliable were to assemble at the occurrence.  He lared at the note stating a kidnapping had occured and crumbled the note in his hand and immediatly opened his window and took off the bird exiting his room and heading towards its roost.

He began running towards the main part of the village as he was to go out on a mission today. Apparently a group of children had been kidnapped and it was his job to go and rescue them. After a ten minute walk Neah entered the shopping district of town. There were shinobi who had secured the perimeter while the kidnapper had barricaded himself inside a building. He began to make his way to the main part of the building when he clutched his head in pain and felt something warm trickle down the side of his face. He placed his hand on his head where he was hit and held it there and looked at the man who had a abundance of bricks along with knife. I warned the village not to send any shinobi now a kids gotta die enjoy the blood on your hands little brat."


 He laughed mercilessly as neah pointed a index finger towards the mans skull and shot out a bone bullet from his finger. The man blinked in confusion and fell out the window with a hole in the middle of his forehead. He sighed and walked towards the body and gave it a swift kick to check if he was really dead he then protruded his arm out and made a set of bones around his hand in the shape of a hammer and smashed through the front door and  wafted at the debris. " Its alright kids its all over." kids. He took a step forward and proceeded into the building and walked up the stairs and retracted the bones back into himself and opened the door and looked at the scared children's faces. they were only a few years younger than he was. he gave a warm and gentle smile and outstretched his hand " Come lets get you guys back home to your parents." The children whimper but a sole child out stretched there hand and clasped it in neahs own unafraid a grateful expression on there face,   and he gently carried each and every child back to there home within the village. He didn't mind he enjoyed seeing a happy family he had even made sure to cover the children's eyes when they got out of the building so they wouldn't see the dead body. He didn't want to kill the man but he had no choice in the matter innocent lives were in danger and he could not abide there lives to be taken. 


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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Fri Jun 16, 2017 3:49 am

Your personality talks about the will of fire, but thats a leaf concept. Not sure if that is what is intended or just a typo. If intended okay, but how do you know about it?

Please add a paragraph about your appearance including height and weight.

Include a word count in your Rp sample.

Everything else seems fine.


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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Fri Jun 16, 2017 8:10 am

Edited Senpai!
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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Sun Jun 18, 2017 3:49 am

My bad I forgot to mention the rp sample for village ninja should be one of the scenarios listed below.
A group of civilian children have been kidnapped. Either role play rescuing them and taking care of the abductor or abducting said children and holding them for ransom. 

-A guarded caravan is forced to stop due to a broken wheel in a territory famous for rogue ninja activity. Role play either guarding the contents of the caravan against bandits or role play the bandit leading the attack on the caravan.

-Sometimes ninja defect a village. Role play either defecting a village to embark on the path of a Missing Ninja or role play the loyal village ninja that stops him/her. 

As a village ninja you should rp as the defender. After that I'll look over the rp sample. Everything else for sure this time is good though. lol


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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Thu Jun 22, 2017 2:37 am

There did the scenario now gimme my approval xD
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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Thu Jun 22, 2017 4:39 am

The scenario is a normal morning and then you randomly stumble into a hostage situation the last 200 or so words. It doesn't flow well. Please try to do the scenario by taking out the old stuff that was in the last scenario.


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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Thu Jun 22, 2017 5:55 am

Im keeping the waking up but i changed it around a bit and got rid of the bs majority so itw is well within the rules now.
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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Thu Jun 22, 2017 10:11 am

Trial Approved.


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PostSubject: Re: Neah Kaguya Done   Thu Jun 22, 2017 1:35 pm

Whooohoo, a newcomer!

I have to note two things (I actually did not read the RP sample cause I'm lazy and excused.... but I trust Kyo on that one)... first thing would be the health stat. It doesn't make much difference at this point but I suppose one should learn correct practices from the start, as such - please do not add bloodline bonus like that. Those fields are for you base stats and that's the starting 30 that academy students get, all bonuses are tracked separately.

And the second thing is something that could probably be skipped as well and it's something you as a new member of the community are excused for not knowing. It's regarding your backstory; it says Neah was born in Kirigakure (presumably 8 years ago). What must be noted here is that the village that was called Kirigakure 8 years ago was destroyed some 5 years ago with very few survivors remaining. The village that is currently known as Kirigakure is a different village in a different place and used be called Shimagakure until less than 2 years ago when whole population of another village called Tengakure migrated there.
So, unless you claim your character was one of those few survivors and escaped a village destruction at the hands of some of the strongest characters on the site at the time as a 3 year old toddler.... well, then he should have either been in Shimagakure to begin with or migrated here with the rest of Tengakure.
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