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Altar Shinkou

Fame : 28
Home Village :
  • Mist

Element(s) : Lightning, Water, Fire
Clan : Shinkou
Clan Element : Yuumei
Bloodline : Meigan, Byakugan
Ryo : 18

PostSubject: Iterum   Sun Apr 30, 2017 10:18 am

Name: Iterum
Element: Variable
Rank: A
Spec Type: SpaceTime/Nintaijutusu
Backstory: Iterum works on the principle of Chronokinetic Combat, or Jikanjutsu, described as ‘the feeling that you have been kicked in the head this way before’. After researching the idea, Altar thought up a jutsu similar to the original concept,, quite literally practicing combat through time. At first, the jutsu was... ineffective. The afterimage hits were weak and barely made any impact. However, through careful application of spacetime chakra to an ordinary attack and more and more practice in use, the attacks seemed to reverse themselves and occur again, like a tape on a loop. With each successive pass, the attack got stronger, interlapping on itself again and again.

Appearance: N/A
Handseals: Nin: Ram - Ox - Monkey
Duration: Explained Below
Cooldown: 2 posts
Range: Nin: 50 meters
Power: Nin: 50
Speed: Nin: 50
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: Tai: +20 speed/strength
What it does: This jutsu allows the user to utilize the time aspect of Space/Time to repeat attacks on their offenders, taking away from the necessity to repeat the attacks themselves. When used as a ninjutsu technique, this jutsu takes the form of either a beam, about two inches in diameter, fired from either hand or the mouth. Depending on the element used, the beam may carry additional properties. Fire leaves a severe burn that decreases speed by 20, Lightning has a paralyzing effect for one post, Wind and Earth physically push the target a meter back from the point of impact. None of these effects happen if the target has higher health than the power of this jutsu.

If used as Taijutsu, this jutsu is simply a punch or kick that carries the same effect as the ninjutsu beam would. The Taijutsu attack can be infused with an element the same way the ninjutsu beam would be, or it can be left as a plain and simple kick/punch.

Now this is where it gets interesting. If this jutsu lands, then the target is locked into a deja vu situation, and every two posts receives the same pain, feeling and effect (burn, stun, etc.) as though they had been hit by this jutsu. However, every time this effect occurs, the target receives the power of the jutsu +20 instead, the power continuing to add with each time this effect occurs. IE the first hit is the power of the jutsu, the second is power + 20, the third is power + 40, etc. Also, every time the target is ‘hit’ by this effect, their reaction time is debuffed by 20 by this effect. This debuff lasts 2 posts, but refreshes and adds itself with each aftereffect of this jutsu. IE first debuff is 20, second is 40, third is 60, etc. 

This jutsu can also be used in conjunction with Fuinjutsu. As such, when a target would be struck by an ‘aftereffect’ of this jutsu, the user may place a seal on them at that moment, as they would if they were making contact with the target. This, of course, follows the rules of the fuinjutsu seal attempting to be placed in terms of resistance, cost and cooldown.

Character Specific: Altar Shinkou
Wordcount to learn: 4,000
Action Cost: 40 AP
Mastery: N/A
Bonus Requirements: Ninjutsu and/or Taijutusu. Fuinjutsu spec and 3 Fuin techs to place seals with the fuinjutsu aspect.
Canon or Custom: Custom

Last edited by Altar Shinkou on Fri Aug 11, 2017 2:30 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Ezra Terumi

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Clan Element : Lava, Boil
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PostSubject: Re: Iterum   Tue May 23, 2017 5:51 am

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Aryll Hyuuga

Fame : 140
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Element(s) : Suiton
Clan : Hyuuga
Bloodline : Byakugan
Ryo : 0

PostSubject: Re: Iterum   Tue May 30, 2017 6:26 pm

Alright, it's Altar, so approved


Gimme some more backstory, this is an incredibly powerful technique.

Detail the elemental aspects further. For example, how long does the paralysis from raiton last? What do the burns do? Perhaps a speed debuff like some katon techs have?

Multipliers are banned. I'll give you +20 power per successive hit. You could make them stack if you did it this way. 

With all that you're already getting, the RT debuff is too much. -20 per "hit" sounds better. Detail how long this debuff lasts now that it's changed (Assuming you change it)

I'm gonna say no to the Fuinjutsu aspect at the moment, as this jutsu already gives you a lot. You'd have to do some major work to the jutsu to make that okay, adding a Fuin spec few being one of the easier things to start with. 

Ap cost should be 40

For now the buff is good, we might need to talk about it some more later, though

Get 2 it boi
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Altar Shinkou

Fame : 28
Home Village :
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Element(s) : Lightning, Water, Fire
Clan : Shinkou
Clan Element : Yuumei
Bloodline : Meigan, Byakugan
Ryo : 18

PostSubject: Re: Iterum   Fri Aug 11, 2017 2:31 pm

Edited as requested iirc.
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