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PostSubject: Yang art: yang aura   Sun Apr 30, 2017 1:04 am

Name: yang art, yang aura
Element: yang
Rank: S
Spec Type: medical-ninjutsu
Backstory: the art of protection is vast. Yens experience through use of defensive techniques improved over time. But there was also a strong synergy between two concepts he practiced. Preservation, and duribility. For every yin had its yang. 

The development of new talents had yen ho back ad reflect on his drawbacks. Even with his best he could feel defeat was a nessary thing to face. Then again his opponents were much faster than him.  Yen needed a way to up the game and his defenses. So by looking into one of his greatest defenses body and soul, yen theorized that by tackling the aura he could make it better.

This lead to complete focus on developing a protective aura. Keeping the user despite costs safe from harm. This requires the full force of the  user. Costing more than a usual technique. The aura holds the key safety of keeping the user safe, or at least if repaired too much, or overpowered it can be used to punish thoes who attack the user carelessly. 

By the aura being the users chakra  the aura is simply treated as a wall between the user and harmful things.  Via jutsu, touch, or weapons.

For with the raw chakra comes the weakness of thoes who utilize raw chakra. Such as other yin/ yang techniques,and  offensive medical jutsu. Despite this all jutsu will still follow the rules of the aura. 

Hence if struck it is like hitting a wall. if not strong enough an attack is simply stopped and dispersed. If attacked from a fist or a weapon it would simply do a recoil like effect. Like hitting a wall. Through vibrations from the impact anything that hit the aura would suffer the recoil effect. in the sense of violent vibrations. 






Appearance: the user is sorrounded by a dark grey aura,  the aura is centered around the user. And seeps into the ground immediatly beneath the users feet.
Handseals: ox, ram, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, boar
Duration: untill cancled 
Cooldown: posts used +3
Range: self, vibration range: 15 meters
Power: chakra stat
Speed: chakra stat
Health: chakra stat
Stat Boosts: none
What it does:

This technique is based off of the yang aura from yens Body and soul. The aura remains centered around the user despite movement, and due to the pesky  nature keeps the user reletively safe from most jutsu. By the aura sorrounding the user it also channels into the immediate ground below the user keeping the user safe from both damage sorrounding them and below them.

 This aura is simply treated as if it was armor keeping the user safe from all elemental (including advanced elements containing 1 basic element.) and taijutsu/ weaponry attacks and techniques. If an attack does not pass the power of the aura it is stopped. If its an jutsu the jutsu is hence dispersed, and neutralized preventing any damage from occuring and placing said jutsu on cooldown. While taijutsu techniques and weapons bounce off the aura.  If an attack  does pass then it continues, but damage is reduced to the difference between the power of the attack vs the power of the aura.  


Objects, jutsu, living things or constructs (both physical and chakra) that make physical contact the aura will be met with force from the aura sent to them in recoil. This will Redirect any damage delt to the aura in an omidirectional aoe vibration starting from the outside of an aura and ending 10 meters surrounding, below, and above the aura. The redirection effect is noted as vibrations seen and felt through the air/ ground, or objects.  This recoil damage goes up to the power of this jutsu. The damage redirected is considered blunt damage, and travels through each object/living creature equal to the speed stat of the jutsu. every 3 meters the vibrations travel the power of the vibrations are reduced by 20.

(Example: person strikes the aura. They will feel as if they hit a wall with all of their strength. Hence taking recoil damage. A blade hits the aura. Then the blade will take the recoil damage as well as the holder of the blade.)

damage from the vibrations vary based on how close something is to the user. The ground underneath the user, and surrounding the user will often crack or cause a a crater immediately under their feet with the earth beneath them being reduced to fine powder. For others if not durable shattered bones, and torn muscles, as well as other effects.  While weapons, armors and other such items are shattered if not durable, or dented and bent out of use.

The aura moves with the user at the center the entire time it is active.  This Ensuring that the user is protected at all times.


weakness through the basics

Due to the nature of this aura. All non elemental/ yin-yang ninjutsu, and offensive medical jutsu, used aginst the aura gain +20 power. The techniques still follow the same rules as the rest of the jutsu. Able to be disperesed, reduced, and destroyed the same.





Character Specific: yensung aburame (can be taught)
Wordcount to learn: 10k
Action Cost: 100, 70 per post,
Mastery: yes
Bonus Requirements: must know Body and soul,must have over 80 chakra and stanima, 
Canon or Custom: custom


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Mon May 08, 2017 6:49 am


Alright so going through this, my initial instinct was to balance the debuff and remove the ability to extend the aura further. The repair effect needs more detail. Does it cost the same AP to rip small, medium and big tears in the Aura? How often can the Aura be repaired before giving way?

I'll be talking about the debuff at chakra stat effect with another mod as i'm not entirely sure what to do with it yet. <3


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Mon May 08, 2017 11:16 pm

Yep so added a special gift to hyuuga (yall can thank me later...) since i enjoy making interesting and engaging weaknesses. 

Opting to keep extention.

1. Repairing costs flat 100 ap to repair.At tec speed. Might not seem like much, but with a nice +50 ap upkeep and to repair again... it gets up there. Also added -40 power if hit by a none elemental jutsu (yin yang), medical jutsu, none elemental gentle fist tecs. because these tecs are wierd like that. (Links to chakra stat power, but will adjust the numbers if changed to keep it well useful)

2. The ap cost quiet terrifying hight tbf (likes making tecs that makes a diffrence and is expensive)

3.  The disperse is now linked to three possible triggers. One that is remote, one that is automatic upon being overwealmed by a good stron non ele tec, one if repaired too much. (Aka -120 power aura) As it will be interesting to watch as ppl proceed to beat down on an aura  with none elementals or actually use chakra scalpel. 

4. Gentle fist as i considered it a bit can now be considered non elemental as long as they dont get giddy decide to mix some element in it. (This will be alot of fun to watch tune in)


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Tue May 09, 2017 10:03 pm

Actually removed extention ability


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Sun May 14, 2017 12:51 pm


Requesting a second opinion because i still think a debuff = chakra stat is too op despite all the limations you attached to this. I dont want to short change you and deny it so I will defer to a second mod opinion. <3


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Sun May 14, 2017 4:12 pm

Hm well lets not keep this in the wood work too long. Since im flexible i can go between a safe number.


How about 85-99 power. Ill keep the speed and health respectively chakra stat.

In exchange ill make the power reduction -30. And reduce disperse range to 35 meters.


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Sun May 28, 2017 10:57 pm


Alright so i did some thinking and consulting and debuff at chakra stat really is too much.
Keeping in mind that this is a powerful S rank, I would be okay with debuff at half of chakra stat.

You can lift some of the extravagant AP costs in compensation too.

Also you'll need to specify that all these forms of the jutsu can only be used once a topic and maybe just one at a time.

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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Mon May 29, 2017 2:58 am

Reduction



Ill put a solid cap for the reduction. As per required it'll reduce at half of chakra stat  capping at 150. (Unless we can finally go past 300 chakra... without hero water...)

Abilities mechanics


Normally i like utilizing certain abilities on  mi charecters. Hence the nature of the technique. So in response of the once a topic ill toss a cooldown on the abilities. How about this:

 2 posts on the sharpen/blunt swapping

3 Posts on the repair effect. (Dont want kids to try to metagame as much)

The damage reduction is the core aspect of the technique hence does not need a cooldown. 

Once a topic on the sentient effect. But if aura is repaired sentient goes on 1 post cd. 


Ap cost

i'm keeping repair the same ap cost. Because lets be frank...

Reduced ap cost initially, and the cost of both blunt/ sharp, and sentient aura effects, and upkeep cost.
 


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Wed Jun 14, 2017 1:17 am


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PostSubject: Re: Yang art: yang aura   Sat Sep 30, 2017 3:21 am

Alrighty Yen. Let’s fix this up and get it reapproved.

 
So I’d like you to remove the whole DR part as this already acts as a shield.   
 
Second thing is please remove the whole sharpness aspect of this barrier, the power can stay though.
 
In exchange, you can say that his technique is treated as having elemental advantage against all elements, but non elemental techniques only get +20 instead of +60 against it.


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