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PostSubject: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Sat Apr 15, 2017 2:02 pm

Name:  body and soul art: yin released part 1 body of yin
Element: yin
Rank: S
Spec Type: medical
Backstory:  delving further into his yin/yang studies. yen took to studying, and meditating on the technique he once created.

The body and soul was known to yen as incomplete. As it held its own weaknesses, and further branched into two forms of the yin/yang spectrum. Yen began his studying by looking into the two as not a whole, but separate things. Each One being taken apart and examined separately. While yang focused on a more physical aspect. The yin aspect took to the spiritual portion. Combined they created many miracles, but alone they were agents  of miracles, and destruction.  By utilizing his chakra and concentrating it to amplify his body. Yen found that like before his body reacted naturally to his focus. 

Taking away some of the more jarring drawbacks of body and soul. yen learned he could in fact utilize his  normal elemental techniques. The he also found he can increase two of his  parameters by focusing his yin chakra in full force. This is used to drastically increase their combative abilities. Also By Utilizing his yin chakra.  The he  is able stabilize his body while taking damage even above his  normal threshold.. 

Appearance:  none with normal vision except a swirling light grey hue around the user. with chakra vision his chakra would be bright and seemingly powerful. While the physical augmentations are not visually shown
Handseals: dragon, ox, ram,
Duration: up to 7 posts
Cooldown: posts used +1
Range: self
Power: none
Speed: none
Health: none
Stat Boosts: +70 chakra, +70 health, speed, or strength.
What it does:

This being the full internal force of yens Body and soul. This focuses on enhancing the users body, and chakra. As an instrument of self preservation and protecting the user. While the first effect is to boost both the body and surging the user to a full powered state enhancing the individuals chakra power and the choice of  durability, strength, or speed to astonishing levels.  the user can only choose 1 stat other then chakra to boost for the duration of the technique. 

The second effect amplifies the users medical techniques by an additional +25 power.


Character Specific: yensung aburame
Wordcount to learn: 10k
Action Cost: 100 activation. 50 per post.
Mastery: no
Bonus Requirements: must know Body and soul, must have chakra infusion. Must have a base stat requirement of 100 in chakra and stanima.  must have medical as a specialty.
Canon or Custom: custom


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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Wed May 17, 2017 3:14 pm

We have some work to do here...

My greatest concern here is that this jutsu is a bit overloaded. We have stat boosts, jutsu boosts, and damage reduction. So, here is what I'm thinking: either get rid of the dr part or the jutsu boosting part. The choice is yours, but you can't have both. Furthermore, I'd like to see the jutsu buff, if you choose to keep it, narrowed down to a specific field as opposed to 'all jutsu'. As for the stat boosts, I'd like to see the stats be set in stone (ie no swapping stats).

That's all I have right now. Please bump this when you're ready for another look.


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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Wed May 17, 2017 4:09 pm

Simple fix bump


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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Wed May 17, 2017 4:49 pm

Duration/Cooldown: Let's put a duration on this (~6 posts). Naturally, you can attach a lesser cooldown as well.

Stat Boosts: Please set them in stone. It still appears as if they are swappable.

Yin Body Stabilizer: Let's bump the ap cost of this to 25.

Lastly, if you could fix up the spacing on your app it will make it easier to read. Otherwise, that's all I got for you. Please make these changes and you should be golden.


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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Wed May 17, 2017 6:19 pm

So made few changes acceptable.

1. made duriation 8 (due to imo it could be way higher since this requires both chakra and reserves. Aka 80 base chakra and stanima a peice.) 

Cd is respectively  posts used +2. (Debating +3)

As opposed to an ap cost. Ap upkeep gainage in body stabilizer is +30 to the upkeep per post.  Since its a continuous thing. (Don't belive in cheap stuff as its a booster stuffed with drawbacks.) 

Aka post 2: upkeep 80 ap, post 3: 110, post 4: 140, (you know the drill)


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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Sun May 28, 2017 10:23 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Wed Jun 07, 2017 3:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Tue Jun 13, 2017 8:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Sun Jul 02, 2017 7:47 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yin released part 1: body of yin   Wed Aug 09, 2017 8:50 pm

Reworked

Added several effects

Made only a chakra and health booster


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