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PostSubject: Wind Style : Quiet Footsteps   Mon Mar 20, 2017 7:31 pm

Name: Wind Style : Quiet Footsteps
Element: Wind
Rank: E
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory: This technique was developed by an old group of infiltrators to better allow them to sneak around undetected. They found that by using the Wind element they could manipulate the air around them to cushion the usual noise that footsteps make.


Appearance: A muted white aura that surrounds the user's feet.
Handseals: Ram-Horse-Ox
Duration: Until deactivated
Cooldown: Number of posts activated +1
Range: Self
Power: N/A
Speed: Jutsu activates at 5 speed.
Health:
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: Effectively making the users footsteps silent via wind cushioning. This jutsu does not counteract the sound made from armour/weapons, just the sound of footsteps. Also, if the user is using chakra suppression at the same time as using this technique then the chakra suppression will not be compromised and will stay up.


Character Specific: No
Wordcount to learn: 500
Action Cost: 5 for activation and upkeep.
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirements: Wind Element
Canon or Custom: Site Canon


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PostSubject: Re: Wind Style : Quiet Footsteps   Mon Mar 20, 2017 7:48 pm

Good afternoon, let's tango.

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Appearance: When user steps, little puffs of air can be seen squirting out from underneath users feat.
Instead of saying puffs of air how about we just call it an aura of whitish chakra cause one can't really see 'puffs of air'. While you're at it please correct 'feat' to 'feet'

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Range: Users Feet
Can just say 'self' it will make more sense.

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Health: 5, the technique always dissipates if the user is attacked.
You can drop this, people should be able to keep this up for as long as they want whenever they want.

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Effectively making the users footsteps silent via wind cushioning. Though, if the user steps on something that will make a sound, it will make a sound.

Okay, so you contradict yourself here and we need to fix that. The sound made by footsteps is all about what you step on, so this technique is basically useless. I suggest brainstorming how exactly you want to approach this. To illustrate my point take this example: You're walking down a long hall with wooden floors. With this jutsu you'd find that your footsteps still make a sound as the floor will make a sound when walked on. Another example is a dry grassy field; your footsteps will still be heard because of the crunching grass. Do you see what I mean?

That's all I got at the moment. Please hit this with a bump when you want me to look at this again.


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PostSubject: Re: Wind Style : Quiet Footsteps   Mon Mar 20, 2017 7:52 pm

Edited :3


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PostSubject: Re: Wind Style : Quiet Footsteps   Mon Mar 20, 2017 9:01 pm

Approved.


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