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PostSubject: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 27, 2017 1:05 am

Faith Akari


Basic Information


Age: 21
Birthday: January 12th
Gender: Female
Appearance: Faith has long pink hair, fare skin, and piercing blue eyes. She stands at about 5’8 and weighs about 145 pounds. In combat, she wears a black sleeveless tight top and black long pants to give her a little bit more of a dark “Tough Girl” look. She stays in shape, keeping down her body fat at all times and always has a toned body. (see Picture but minus the armored gloves and shoulder blades.)
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Personality: There are two sides of Faith, a strong professional side, and a more gentle side. When she is in the field – doing training/ conducting training, she is very strict, a bit of a slave driver, no nonsense and takes no excuse. This comes from the way her father taught her when she was a child. While this is what she defaults to, deep down, Faith hates this rough and strict side of herself. When she is off the field though, she will act more civil and polite. Deep down though, there is another side of her which is a lot more of a humorous girly girl (AKA her pink hair), but she doesn’t like to let people know that.
History:
Early life
Faith was born into the Akari clan, and to a very strict Father by the name of Takashi Akari. Takashi had Faith training in the ways of the ninja at the age of 5, having her pick up a wooden blade and forcing her to defend herself from himself. Faith often went to bed with bruises. He had a ‘No Nonsense’ kind of personality. The reason that her father did this was because he felt like him and his clan was better than the rest of the shinobi world and was supposed to be the ‘light in the darkness.’ When she was younger, she would grow up and would know only of these beliefs but now feels that they are now incorrect and no one nation or clan should believe their vision for the world is completely right, especially if the person who is right is decided by who was born in a certain clan. Her father had her skip the academy and instead decided to teach Faith on his own outside of the academy. Because of that, she was trained at a more personal level then most academy students were taught. At the age of 12, she would attempt the genin exams while her father was out on a mission. She succeded and became a genin, but her father was unfortunately Killed in Action.
Genin
The young Akari didn’t let her father’s death show too much on her, but it did affect her. As A genin, she soon proved to be above her peers and didn’t join a single team, but rather would bounce around from team to team, finding which team was going on the more, ‘worthy’ missions and would join up with them. Some of the missions she completed included capturing multiple art thief, Escorting VIP’s, guarding graves to stop from the collecting of dna, and defeating some massive worm like monsters. The highlight of her genin career was however when she and her small team was charged with recovering a captured VIP from what was thought to be a group of bandits. When the team arrived at the location of the ‘bandit’s’ base however, they quickly discovered that the group was actually Missing ninjas. After a bloody battle, the Suna team stood victorious. They successfully recovered the VIP and caught the majority of the MN. Due to how many MN were captured during this battle, they were allowed to rank and the team was allowed to become Chunin.

Chunin
As A Chunin, Faith was put into a 3 man squad. Amoung the three man squad, there was a boy by the name of Tsuna, a man that even though he didn’t come from any ninja clans or from any special training, was a natural born leader and on the field showed no slacking and was incredibly brave. Off the field, the man was quite a charismatic funny man. At first, Tsuna got under Faith’s skin and irritated her, until time went by and she started to tolerate the boy, to the point that she liked him, and then to the point she like liked him. As she continued to go on missions with him, Tsuna was able to crack open Faith and get to see more and more of her true self.

A huge part of Suna’s past includes the acceptance of the Kazekage, Faith and the majority of the other Suna population was against, that was until One fateful night shortly after Faith became a Chunin, The Akari was ordered to help evacuate people during a horrible sand storm. Faith helped with the evacuation[, while Koroshi fought and fought the demon After that, a lot of people still distrusted the Kazekage, but Faith had changed her mind, stating If there was any other shinobi that was more deserving than Uchiha to become our leader, they would have been out fighting the Beast with him.

After 5 years, the three-man team was planning to put on a mission to protect some nobles during their honey moon. During this mission however, a few Missing ninja appeared and attempted to capture the VIP’s, while it was unclear what their plans were Faiths team was put in charge of capturing them and protecting their charges. A bloody fight ensued and the three supporters were neutralized and captured, but not without casualties. The team leader, Tsuna, was killed during the battle. This devastated the young Akari and any sort of development she had made since meeting Tsuna was basically crushed. She wanted to slaughter the unarmed and detained enemies. The other shinobi in her team was able to stop her, but she was upset and lost any progression towards become more normal. She wanted to slaughter the MN, but she was able to hide her feelings deep into her heart, and turn the MN’s over. The higher up’s in the village saw her forgiveness and as such granted her a rank up to jounin.

Likes: Hard work, Dedication, Never quitting, (Secretly, she has is a bit of a girly girl deep down, loving candy along with other sweet things, also, cute fluffy animals and stuffed animals, she would rather die than admit this in any regard however)
Dislikes: Slackers when you should be working, Being led by someone who she considers lesser of a leader

Ninja Traits


Rank: Jounin
Village: Suna
Element(s): Fire, Lightning, Water
Specialties: Weaponry, Ninjutsu, Medical
Clan: Akari
Bijuu Request: No

Stats


Health: 10
Chakra: 70
Stamina: 30
Speed: 70
Strength: 20

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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeSun Feb 05, 2017 3:26 pm

Alright, so I see a few things that need some work, but first let me say that I am liking it so far. Now first I am going to start with you being promoted to Chunin, if someone was able to break into the Kazekage office they would have to be a high enough rank to take down B to A class Shinobi being that there would be Jounin and Dust alike guarding the office to prevent any information leaks, as well as to prevent traps being set within the office to harm the Kazekage, or to spy on meeting. So if you could come up with a different way to get that rank up.


Next with the supporters of Amane that part doesn't really make too much sense, given that Koroshi's and her ideals are very close, he tries to honor her memory the best he can, and upon becoming Kazekage had sent people out on missions to try and find her. With that in mind they would have no reason to defect, or to attack any Suna shinobi. The next side part of that is that killing is something against the ideals of the Kazekage, making it where the people of Suna will always try to find another way besides killing, making capturing being more likely. Now if you do still want to add that missing ninja killed the person you loved while out on a mission that is fine, however I would be interested to see how she would handle having to bring them back to the village alive, not being able to kill them to get revenge.



Finally I would like to see a bit more of how you handled the more major events that have happened within Suna, first being the disappearance of Amane, leading to Azaiyo, her right hand man to take over as Kazekage. Only a little bit after that the village was attacked by a Bijuu or a Jin, killing him and many other people, the Leaf and Kumo higher ups showing up to help, saving many lifes, and stopping the beast. The full details are a bit hazy, as to who or what attacked.

Next someone from the Leaf stepping in to be the Kazekage, that is something rather strange and some people had a problem with it. A few years after Koroshi being the Kazekage there was a bad sand storm, people being asked to go to the bunker while he reinforced the walls with his doton, the storm turning out to be the one tailed beast. Koroshi fought it alone while everyone Jounin rank and above helped everyone get inside the safe areas. Despite the efforts some people stuff died either by wide spread attacks, or by falling parts of buildings. After risking his life fighting a beast by himself there was no one questioning him being Kazekage.


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Clan Element : Hikariton
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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 06, 2017 5:25 am

Hey, first of all let me start with saying I am not arguing with you, I am going to make all the changes as you request, but I just would like you to know where my thought processes lies so you can help me create a better character.

(Will make in bold what changes if you just need to skim this, it will be easier for you.
For the first part I would like to talk about is the part about breaking into the kazekage's (I assume your) Office. Part of what was asked of us was to make sure our character's backstory pertains to the Suna backstory, but the only thing I really found on it was the post you made on it. The only problem I had with using that was the fact that I was unclear on how long ago that took place. I wasn't sure if it had happend a couple of weeks ago, or a couple of years ago. (Although, looking back at it and seeing the fact that your character is younger should of been a hint, so my apologize there.) As such, what I did was look through the mission list for Suna and just chose an S-Rank mission which can be found [url= http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t16099-what-happened]Here[/url] and just came up with a reasonable situation that a genin would be asked to do it. I can't find the Chunin promotion missions, and am a little bit hesitant So for now, I am just going to change it to her killing multiple MN. If you would prefer something else, feel free to comment or send me a PM with another preference.

As for the next part, I got the names Confused of Amane and Azaiyo mixed up, I thought Azaiyo was the first kazekage and Amane was the murderer. Whoopsies! Although, You did bring up an intresting fact of bring them back to the village alive rather than killing them. That is a great idea which I think I might steal from you. So I will be swapping Amane's name with Azaiyo, and change the killing of the supporters to capturing them.

The next point you brought up was the part about adding about the event's of the village. As I said before, I was confused about the time line and didn't know how long ago that was, Now that I have a slightly better idea of when it took place, I will be able to add more about it, I think what I will do is have Faith helping with the evacuation. As for the fact that a leaf shinobi was made Kazekage, I think you are trying to put forth the thought that Faith would be against that. While being the secret rebel sounds like a phenomenal idea, but with her character I imagine she would be more like ‘Hey, no one else did anything, so why would it be anyone else?’


Anyways, I attempted to do your changes to the best of my ability, let me know what else I can change to better this character!


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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 08, 2017 11:59 am

With that mission I am talking with other members of staff and we are most likely either going to change or get rid of it as whole because to be honest it makes so many loopholes within the story of the site. With that being said I do like the changes you have made so far, given that you fought against the missing ninja when you were a genin makes everything much easier to work in as they could have been lower ranking ninja, so we do not have to come up with crimes and such that they might have done.

Now let me help clear up the timing of different events, so Amame was Kazekage for years having the backing of Kumo and the Leaf, this lasted until about 5 years ago, that is when she disappeared and Azaiyo took over, he was the Kazekage for maybe a few weeks before the Bijuu/Jin showed up, killing him and going on a blood rage until both the Raikage and Hokage showed up, as well as another Leaf ninja who moved faster than the eye could see, working together they saved many lives and removed the threat. The spot of the Kazekage being open for roughly 2 weeks, during that time the Hokage sent Koroshi to look after the village as the Kage. After leading the village for about 2 years that is when the Ninja by the names of Kozai and Near entered the village and caused some trouble, Koroshi getting his brother Echo to look after the village while he went after the threat himself to make sure if they had gotten any information about Suna, the threat being dealt with, Koroshi only being gone for a few days. Everything was peaceful for about a year amd a half until the one tails attacked the village, masking itself as just a sand storm. Seeing what everyone thought was just a bad storm Koroshi had everyone go to the bunkers to make sure that no one was hurt or lost during the storm while he tried to raise up the walls to prevent any damage to the village, it was later found that it was a tailed beast when it started to shoot Bijuu dama's, and control the sand for wide spread attacks. Seeing the real threat Koroshi ordered everyone to quicken the evacuation while he fought it alone. He was able to take down the beast but without cost, many people died or were hurt, losing their memories.

Besides that and up until now everything has been rather peaceful for Suna, but there has been issue with Kumo, Suna taking in ninja from that village that were about to get away.

Hopefully that helps with the time line, I added extra details about some of the events just in case you wanted to add them into your history.


As for the idea of a Leaf ninja leading Suna, I always put that out there because at first some people did have a problem with someone from a different village leading Suna. You do not have to be one of them, I just like to throw the idea out there just in case someone finds it interesting or finds it easier to mush with their history. Some of the contest rpc's have started from different villages and use that to relate with Koroshi, other write about having a problem with it only changing their mind once they get to know him o.o


Really like the changes you made about your mission and how it was handled, it makes you feel for the character and be able to relate to them. The only thing that I would tweak is the very end. Possibly adding details about how the village saw how strong you were for not giving into hate, and that you were able to make the right choice, making you fitting for the rank up.


Sorry if I jumped around a late when writing this message, headache, tired, and I broke my toe D:


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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeWed Feb 08, 2017 12:53 pm

Oh, I am sorry to hear that, hope you are feeling better soon! First thing I would like to say is thank you for making it clear about the timeline, Could you add that to the main page? I think that would help alot of people tying to make an app.

(Sorry, I am tired as well and am jumping around as well, my sleep cycle is messed up right now,) So, about that change, I will make it, but one of the things I was wanting to do was have that hatred still in her, and prehaps that is a point of CD later, and that she might have thoughts of breaking into the jail they are being held in and slaughtering them (She wouldn't do that, obviously, but I was thinking that thought would be something that she would be fighting against constantly.) I will make that adjustment like you say though.

As for the fact about a leaf leading suna, My bad, I thought I made that update last time, I guess I missed it, my bad Razz

Also, I think I compltely messed up the entire Kage buisness, But I think I understand now. I am going to swap the followers to just regular MN's, with your permision, sir.

One last thing, do you still have the thread that battle happend in (If it was RPed) I am supper intrested in how a battle against a Biju would go (The thought of it is giving me goosebumps.)

Posting the updates now Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 13, 2017 1:22 am

Sorry for the late reply, looking good but Koroshi was the Kazekage before the one tails attacked so that would be the only issue I see. To make things easier I will tell you occ who attacked, it was the nine tailed jin that attacked Suna the first time killing Azaiyo, during this attack Viper Navi and Kurisu showed up to stop him, after the attack Koroshi was put in charge.


Once that bit is changed this is good for approval! :DD

I will be updating the contest details such as history and timeline after the Jounin exams, that way if there has been any recent things of importance happening that effected the village as a whole I can include it in the history for those that might want to use it


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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 13, 2017 2:02 am

Ok, updated Smile


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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 13, 2017 4:08 am

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PostSubject: Re: Faith Akari   Faith Akari I_icon_minitimeMon Feb 13, 2017 4:23 am

Wow! That was quick, thanks!


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