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 Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)

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PostSubject: Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)   Thu Nov 17, 2016 4:39 am

Name: Raiton: Jodan
Element: Lightning
Rank: D Rank 
Spec Type: Taijutsu 
Backstory: While training an old Taijutsu master developed a strong Upper Cut the incorporated the lightning element


Appearance: The fist of the user crackles with Lightning Chakra
Handseals: Tiger - Dog
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 1 Post
Range: Contact
Power: -
Speed: -
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: A +15 Bonus to Speed and +15 Bonus to Power during the second part of the combo
What it does: The user performs the two hand seals quickly, Tiger for power and Dog for lightning before striking at their opponent with a quick upper cut, forming the lightning natured chakra and then as the opponent is struck or dodges the uppercut the user, strikes at another location to land a lightning of a punch/kick on their opponent that is faster than their initial attack.

Character Specific: No.
Wordcount to Learn: 1200
Action Cost: 15
Mastery: Yes.
Bonus Requirements: Lightning Nature
Canon or Custom: Edited Canon, See here Here is the link and Second Wiki Link, Combined to make this technique


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PostSubject: Re: Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)   Thu Nov 17, 2016 1:13 pm

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Range: Contact
Power: 15
Speed: 15
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: A +5 Bonus to Speed during the second part of the combo

So mostly for taijutsu, you don't need to add in a number in the power or speed section. You normally receive a boost in that one move, and this tech really isn't that complicated. So in the stat boost section, you can stat a boost in one, or two stat sections. Since it's a D rank, the number can be from 10-19, while following the ap rules

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Action Cost: 15 Due to a combination of Chakra enhanced Taijutsu

You really don't have to have this tech require a 15 action point cost, it could be 10. But if your adamant about the cost, ok then. Same goes for the bonus requirements.
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)   Thu Nov 17, 2016 2:52 pm

Edits made, I'll check over the others and try to make sure the things youve mentioned so far are corrected in them, thank you for your help


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PostSubject: Re: Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)   Fri Nov 18, 2016 3:47 pm

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Stat Boosts: A +15 Bonus to Speed and +4 Bonus to Power during the second part of the combo

You can make it even, just say +15 speed and +15 strength. That's how most applications are worded, to make it easier. Also, since it's above 10, the action point cost will go up by one for every 2 points pass the marker, so the action cost will go from 10 to 12. The word count as well, every 2 points will equal an extra 50 words so it will cost 1100 words.

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Bonus Requirements: Lightning Nature as primary or secondary affinity, if a teritiary affinity may use for an extra 5 Action Cost

You can get rid of that, since this is just a lowly D rank jutsu. It shouldn't be that hard for anyone to master.
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)   Fri Nov 18, 2016 7:08 pm

edits made, thank you for all of your help by the way


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PostSubject: Re: Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)   Sun Nov 27, 2016 1:02 am

Bump


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PostSubject: Re: Raiton: Jodan (Upper Cut)   Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:47 pm

Approved, sorry for the wait.
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