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PostSubject: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Thu Nov 17, 2016 12:26 am

Name: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Element: Lightning
Rank: C Rank
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory: Created by a wandering ninja years ago, the general theory of the jutsu has been wide spread throughout the land.


Appearance: Several small balls of lightning are released either from the users body or a weapon. It is a bright technique, and makes loud crackling sounds.
Handseals: Monkey - Ox - Boar - Tiger
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 3 Post
Range: 10m
Power: 20
Speed: 20
Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A
What it does: After completing the hand seals the user creates up to 4 balls, made up of Lightning Chakra. These balls are controlled either via hand movements, or telepathically. They emit a small amount of light, no more than 1 meter from the user due to their lightning nature. The main purpose of this technique how ever is to attack an enemy with the balls of lightning chakra. They can travel no more then 10 meters from the user, and when given a pulse of chakra from the user will explode releasing an electrical charge up to 2m around them. Burstingthe balls costs an additional 5 AP .  Orbs are 1 foot wide, by 6 inches tall, with a depth of 4 inches.

Character Specific: No
Wordcount to Learn: 2000
Action Cost: 20 (+5 Ap per post when bursting each ball)
Mastery: Yes
Bonus Requirments: Raiton as an Affinity
Canon or Custom: Canon, Edited, See Here


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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Mon Nov 21, 2016 6:38 pm


I'd advise making the power and speed the same (it will help you with scaling later). Also add how these orbs are controlled within the 5 meter range (which you can increase to 10 if you like). I would also suggest extending duration and CD to 3 posts. <3


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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Mon Nov 21, 2016 11:13 pm

Edits made, I hope the explanation i gave makes sense for how the technique homes in on a person


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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Tue Nov 22, 2016 4:01 am


I would really suggest not using the magnetizing concept, not only will it leave you open to a lot of vague etc but it slightly into magnet release, a banned tech on NRPG <3


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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Tue Nov 22, 2016 12:26 pm

Good point, I did a little bit of research and came up with a better explanation that will allow medical users or even Raiton users who have knowledge of the technique and the person the chance to cancel it out since its such a simple technique. Also this increases the reason why someone with a Raiton primary affinity would be able to use it but those with a Secondary or Tertiary affinity in Raiton would need the extra training.


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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:04 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Mon Nov 28, 2016 11:35 am

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Tue Nov 29, 2016 7:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Tue Nov 29, 2016 8:18 pm


If the lightming orbs gravitate towards the human body, what stops them from hurting the user? <3


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PostSubject: Re: Lightning Rat Violent Quake   Tue Nov 29, 2016 8:22 pm

Bonus Requirments: Raiton as Primary affinity, Needed in order to be able to split your Raiton Chakra into several sects to fire the Balls of Lightning, or User can do an additional 1000 words if secondary affinity and 2000 words if tertiary affinity, to learn to split their Raiton chakra and learn the technique. Also due to needing to reverse the polarity of ones chakra so that they are not targeted by the balls of lightning.

That way the lightning Chakra wont go after them but after the next nearest source. It would have a draw back if fighting with a team, if your teammate didn't have a Lightning Affinity and know it then you would run the risk of the balls targeting them instead.
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