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Kamina Uzamaki
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PostSubject: Body Flicker   Thu Oct 06, 2016 6:11 pm

Kamina tried to think of ways to better himself as a shinobi. He really thought about all of his flaws and weaknesses and came to the realization that he wasn't fast enough he had kinda assumed speed was just like that. He never thought he would keep up with Ryden so he had never tried but what if he could he knee movement flicker but that wasn't enough. He needed something almost instantaneous to get him to places quicker than his feet could carry him. He really thought about if hard enough one the next day he sparred with Ryden he decided to push his sped to the limit. He had to rest out his hypothesis on the man he needed to best. He charged at him trying to get the best of him normally full on assault wasn't his strategy so this caught Ryden off guard. But Kaminas smiled was come as soon as Ryden took hike out with lightning fast speed. Kamina was frustrated he needed someway to dodge attacks in an instant and that's when it hit him Body flicker maybe if Movement flicker wasn't going to help he could use body flicker. All he needed was something to take him from point a to point b and this was perfect he had seen plenty of shinobi do it before he tried to do the hand signs he had seen. But he realized he couldn't accurately remember them so he had to really focus on his memories he had seen it happen a million times. He just never bothered to remember the hand signs unless he had tried the most basic hand sign he could think of Ram and then tried to move. He felt a burst of speed but as soon as he tried to move it disappeared. He felt frustrated how would he channel all this speed and move at the same time Kamina sat down and did it again. This time calming down and as the speed started consuming him like a wave of uncontrollable energy. And slowly tried to love and the energy nearly left him completely and he struggled to get it back almost like a tug of war game. Before it completely abandoned him he laid down what was wrong was he missing a secret step in the middle because so far any time he tried to move it left him. He tried it again this time mane he should do it quickly the hesitation was the problem he thought. So he did the hand sign again and let loose and rushed forward and for a brief second the speed was his and let him go forward before leaving it all escape him and he fell on his face. He didn't bother getting up this time he was defeated he rolled over on his back and yet again wondered what the problem was he jumped up. He was going to practice this until he got it right he wouldn't give up. So he went at it again this time going straight at it again without thinking and this time stopped halfway. But then it didn't go away at first and he appeared two feet forward. Wait did it work he was confused there's no way its that easy he tried it again. But this time he tried to do tie same thing he did before but instead it did go away and he ended up flat on his face again.he kept at this though doing the same thing and constantly ending up on his face. But this didn't him he was willing to take the humiliation as  long as he could learn this technique. After a while his face couldn't take the punishment but he needed to do what he did beforehand so he had to think of a less painful way to learn this jutsu. So he concentrated on what he did before he did the ram hand sign. And then Chakra surged through him giving him speed but then he couldn't remember what he did he felt that speed and he did go forward maybe he was fighting it. Maybe he should just go where the Chakra wants maybe that's been his problem this whole  time so he got up grudgingly expecting to fall on his face yet again but for once. Was completely calm and decided to do this slowly he did the hand sign for Ram and felt the Chakra surge through hIm and in that split second he had to make a decision. So he moved and this time he felt himself moving faster than he could have ever thought. But he realized he could not control where he ended up he didn't want to go full speed into a wall. So he decided in that split second he needed to make his mind up on where he was headed. He couldn't hesitate not even for a second so he tried it again this time making the hand sign for Ram and then feeling the familiar surge of power and then rushing out and being 5 feet away. Good he thought but now he needed to go do it more flawlessly he got the rough basics down he just needed to master it a little bit so he set out to do it. Pushed all his power in and then disappeared in a cloud of smoke this he wasn't expecting he just expected to surge as usually and in that split second he one exactly where he wanted to go and then he appeared right behind Ryden and the said “boo”. Ryden turned around wielding his kunai to see his student laughing at him he smiled “whatever that was mildly impressive”. “Mildly impressive. I got you good and you know it” Kamina said But Kamina felt proud of his accomplishments and know he knew he could get the drop on his master and that little bit of knowledge made all the pain and humiliation worth it. As he smiled Ryden walked with him towards the entrance  smiling alongside his protege

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PostSubject: Re: Body Flicker   Thu Oct 06, 2016 9:06 pm

Approved <3

You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3

"How many scars did she justify,
Just because she loved the one holding the knife."

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