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Princess Love <3
Chuunin
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Fame : 10
Home Village :
  • Leaf

Element(s) : Lightning, Earth
Clan : Hyuuga
Bloodline : Byakugan
Ryo : 5250
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PostSubject: Raiton Cape   Fri Sep 23, 2016 4:08 am

Skill Name: Raiton Cape


Appearance:
When using this skill, a thin layer of lightning chakra runs across the user's body, only noticeable if you are studying them close up. When running at full speed the user seems to leave a trail of tiny sparks behind, which if touched would give you a small, but harmless shock.

Backstory:
In an attempt to level the playing field against stronger shinobi Love created the Raiton Cape. While training her lightning chakra Love decided to try wrapping it around her body in order to make herself faster. While she failed at increasing her speed she learned that the lighting chakra created a cloak that could be used offensively.

Effect:
The user breathes in, building up lightning chakra and in a forceful exhale the chakra is released creating a cape 0.5 meters around their body. Not only is the lightning chakra running across the body, but it is traveling through the chakra network, allowing for disruption of it through various tenketsu throughout the body. A successful open palm slap, closed fist punch, or two finger strike while using the cape will cause the opponent to be paralyzed for 2 posts. If the foe has over 30 health they’re unaffected. Should the user or foe be wearing any armor made of silver, copper, or gold the cape will not work.


Wordcount Training: 2,000
Character Exclusive: Love and those she teaches.
Bonus Requirements: Taijutsu spec, Lightning as First element


Character Info
Love Sakumo
Age:16
Rank:Chunin
Character Stats
HLT:50
CHA:65
STA:37
SPD:81
STR:40
AP:495
RT:141
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Fri Sep 23, 2016 5:50 am

Could this skill come with a trigger, like some condition that the user must undergo in order for this to activate? For example, such and such should happen, in order for the cape to activate. Also, could you go into more detail as to why this grants you poison resistance?

Oh yeah, why are you making this skill only usable by chunin, if you aren't a chunin? You can't make apps if you cannot use them lol. That's all I see for now doe..
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Ryo : 5250
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Fri Sep 23, 2016 6:44 am

Edited & I thought it might be too powerful for genin plus I'm working on becoming chunin. But I removed it.


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Love Sakumo
Age:16
Rank:Chunin
Character Stats
HLT:50
CHA:65
STA:37
SPD:81
STR:40
AP:495
RT:141
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Element(s) : Fire, Lightning, Water
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Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 47000
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Fri Sep 23, 2016 11:32 am


Just to add to what Ganki said, this looks more like a jutsu than a skill. It needs a trigger, costs AP and has several different effects. I would suggest making it a jutsu.

Sorry for the intrusion. <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3



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Bloodline : Byakugan
Ryo : 5250
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Fri Sep 23, 2016 10:12 pm

DX I can't make custom jutsu yet; I want this to be a skill so that hand seals wouldn't be needed.

Would it be possible to keep the speed boost and poison resistance then have a jutsu that adds damage reduction & causes paralysis?


Character Info
Love Sakumo
Age:16
Rank:Chunin
Character Stats
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CHA:65
STA:37
SPD:81
STR:40
AP:495
RT:141
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Element(s) : Fire, Lightning, Water
Clan : Akari
Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 47000
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Sat Sep 24, 2016 12:12 am


I personally feel those are too many affects for a skill but that's just me. You're free to get another mod's opinion. <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3



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Just because she loved the one holding the knife."

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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Mon Sep 26, 2016 1:04 am

I feel the same as Aki, but I also feel like this is really similar to Lightning Release Armour.


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Bloodline : Golden Eye
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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Thu Dec 01, 2016 7:39 am


Please let me know if this is still being worked on <3


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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Sat Dec 03, 2016 1:32 am


You can either pick the 10 DR or the paralyze effect but not both. <3.


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PostSubject: Re: Raiton Cape   Sun Dec 04, 2016 4:13 am

Edited.


Character Info
Love Sakumo
Age:16
Rank:Chunin
Character Stats
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CHA:65
STA:37
SPD:81
STR:40
AP:495
RT:141
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