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 Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension

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Kiru <3
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PostSubject: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:54 am

Name: Light Style: Sunlight Ascension
Element: Light
Rank: A
Spec Type: Ninjutsu
Backstory: This technique is named after those few Akari who learn how to shine like the sun itself. Akari who awaken the basic Light Ascension tend to be pre-disposed to be heroic, and battle on the side of Light. However this heroism rarely ends well, and not many survive to truly comprehend the power they have tapped into. This technique is for those Akari who push themselves past their limits, and refuse to fall in battle while enemies still wait in front of them.


Appearance:  
Looks:
 
The user glows brightly with Light energy, though it seems much more wild and untamed. It seems as if lightning crackles around the user. Though it looks much less controlled, the user actually has much higher influence over its looks. Even choosing if they would like their hair to glow with Light Style.

Handseals:
Duration: 6 Posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Range: Self (30 meters Solar Flare)
Power: 50 (Light Burst)
Speed: 50 (Light Burst)
Health:
Stat Boosts: +50 to two spots (Not Stamina)
What it does: This technique is the power of an Akari that has been so imbued with the energy of Light that enemies who face them swear they move at speeds faster then sight, and glow brighter then the morning sun. Some of this is over-exaggeration, while some is based on the overwhelming power of this transformation. Akari in this form gain some effects while in this form.
Solar Flare: The user can increase the brightness to unbearable levels for a post for enemies around them, blinding those without the sense to cover their eyes. Covers 30 meters around user.. Those Blinded will stay that way for 2 posts. This effect has a 3 post cooldown.

Momentum Shift: Using the massive amount of energy they have built up within themselves, an Akari can use their chakra to boost them to top speed, as well as redirecting themselves if need be. 5 ap per boost.
 

Character Specific: Akari Clan
Wordcount to learn: 4,000 (Replaces Super Akari, also known as Light Ascension)
Action Cost: 50 to start, 40 to maintain.
Mastery: N
Bonus Requirements: Golden Eye lvl 1. Light Ascension Unlocked.
Canon or Custom: Custom BL


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Element(s) : Fire, Lightning, Water
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Clan Element : Light
Bloodline : Golden Eye
Ryo : 47600
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Mon Jul 25, 2016 3:37 pm


Bring the substat buff down please, usually even S ranks offer only a plus 20, this is an A rank.

Cap number of people that can be blinded by the solar flare effect. Add the thirty meter bit to range as well. <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3

"Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light.
I have loved the stars too fondly, to be fearful of the night."

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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Wed Jul 27, 2016 11:36 pm

Brought Substat buff down 5 points.

Solar Flare is a multidirectional lightburst around the user, how would it not affect everyone in range that doesn't shield their eyes?


Health: 35
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 60
Speed: 100
Strength: 30
AP: 843
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Fri Aug 05, 2016 11:26 am


My personal opinion is still that you're trying for too many effects for one jutsu. Its an offensive tech, its a stat boster, its a substat booster and is an AoE tech with no limits on victims. My advice would be to remove the substat boost entirely which would go a long way towards balancing this.

Alternately, you can ask for a second opinion as I might be too close to Hikariton stuff to mod it fairly. <3


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I have loved the stars too fondly, to be fearful of the night."

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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Fri Aug 05, 2016 5:50 pm

You know what Aki I GOT that second opinion and you wanna know what he said?

He said to remove the substat booster so I did <3

Does that mean we can keep the AOE tech?


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Strength: 30
AP: 843
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Fri Aug 05, 2016 6:00 pm


Yup <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3

"Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light.
I have loved the stars too fondly, to be fearful of the night."

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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Sun Aug 07, 2016 1:38 pm


Cooldown should be at least equal to posts used. And no using this to go full speed on the first go since this is not a Tai tech/shouldn't go over momentum rules. <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3

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I have loved the stars too fondly, to be fearful of the night."

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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Sun Aug 07, 2016 8:00 pm

Looking at speed rules
"Certain jutsu and or skills that can generate momentum such as Body Flicker can allow one to travel at their maximum speed without build up."
The momentum ability falls under this does it not?


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Strength: 30
AP: 843
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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:29 am


True but those techs aim solely at that. Again i feel you're trying for to too many effects. Approving it this way would be just replacing one op effect for another. <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3

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I have loved the stars too fondly, to be fearful of the night."

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PostSubject: Re: Hikariton; Sunlight Ascension    Tue Aug 16, 2016 7:17 am

This technique is being made somewhat on the advisory of Echo, and I don't think its too much out of the norm. The upgrade to this will have around 5 abilities that have been suggested to me. Echo wants me to go on my gut, and I don't think this is too overblown, so a second opinion might be good.


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