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 Kyousuke Snow (Hoshi Contest)

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Kyousuke Snow <3
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Element(s) : Lightning, Water, Earth,
Clan : Jugo
Clan Element : None
Bloodline : Sage Transformation
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PostSubject: Kyousuke Snow (Hoshi Contest)   Sat Jul 02, 2016 3:42 am

Character: Kyousuke Snow



Basic Information


Age: 18


Birthday: Jun, 4
Gender: Male 


Appearance:


Kyousuke has orange hair and white skin. Most of his head is bald except for a patch of hair at the top of his head. He is 6’1 and very fit. His arms are very thick and become even thicker if he chooses to flex or do some other action, of course his constant workouts leave his body in a very similar way. The man tends to not wear a shirt under his jounin jacket and just wears a pair of pants, with a large buckle and a pair of brown boots. The buckle is normally Hoshi’s symbol or something Hoshi related like a medal from when Hoshi was established. The man is usually found with a cigarette in his mouth. He bangs the metal on his black fingerless gloves together to cause a spark which is used to light the tobacco. There are times when Kyousuke’s skin will change color and spikes grow from his body, but he usually keeps it under control. It is pretty noticeable when your skin turns gray and you turn into something reminiscent of a porcupine.


Personality:


Kyousuke isn’t a nice person per say, but he is willing to help others even if it means at his own personal costs. He doesn’t like it when people show gratitude as it wasn’t something he grew up with in the streets of Hoshi. When he does do something generous he likes it to be anonymous or for no one to mention it, if they do mention it he will probably just continue moving without a word. When it comes to training the man is very loose he thinks it is less about him talking and more of the student finding their own way to do something. He may show them a technique once, maybe twice if he is in a good mood, but never a third time. After that first time it is up to them to experience the technique on their own. As a prior queen’s guard candidate Kyousuke is very loyal to Akihana and will do anything to ensure not only the safety of her physical being, but spiritual being as well. If there is someone who wishes to berate or even harm her Kyousuke has no problem physically throwing someone out of the palace even at the costs of a tongue lashing later. (Other non-lethal means are employed otherwise.) The ninja likes to pray when the sun begins to set or even when it rises, he believes in gods and the effects they have on the world, but doesn’t wait for their help in times of need. He believes the people are given the power of the gods and that power gives them the courage to act. Much like with learning a jutsu he believes finding your spirituality is something that must be done on your own, otherwise you won’t truly grasp the concepts.


History:

He was born in Haven country where, where Hoshi now stands, Kyousuke had parents at one point, but after countless attacks by ninja they were killed. That is what Hoshi used to be like it was survival of the fittest, his parents taught him of the gods and he prayed to them every night to keep the demon inside of his head away because when he came out things got scary. Kyousuke was only five when his parents were killed, they raided their bodies, stole everything they had, and left Kyousuke alive to watch him suffer as he died a slow death. That is when the voices started to call to the boy. He thought they were angels, but they were actually demons. When he would pray to the gods the voices would leave, turned by the god’s holy power. They would return though after some time. Kyousuke would usually do the same, but with each passing day and each passing transgression against the gods happening in the land the voices grew louder, as the land grew tainted with blood and became unholy. 
 
 
Kyousuke survived the first year without his parents by, eating rodents, or whatever insect happened to cross him. He avoided people that were bigger than himself as they always had some new stolen blade they would wish to test out on someone. Kyousuke witnessed these tests first hand as they went around disfiguring children and the elderly, he always hid though. The voices always chose these moments to call out to him. “You should kill them! You have the power, let us take over.” At this moment as one of the rogues was about to kill a small girl Kyousuke let the voices take over. “Want test blade? Blade test me!” The words spoken were in broken English as the voices fought for control over the body. Kyousuke ran forward laughing as he did so, when a blade came forward it was met with a body spike. Another formed and pierced through the man. “Ahaa, haa, hah, haaa!” He yelled swinging a massive clubbed hand at another of the men sending the body of the dead one forward. The man hit with his backswing was sent into a boulder killing him on impact only one remained and he was on the run as soon as the man went flying. Kyousuke looked at the girl and picked her up with his one massive arm. “No, don’t. Please god no.” Kyousuke shouted trying to regain control over his body. He put the girl down and told her to run it was at that moment he was knocked out by someone unknown.
 
 
Waking up in a bed was odd, waking up in a bed in a castle was even more odd. The boy looked around the growths on his skin were gone and he felt normal. He remembered what happened to those people though. He saw someone tending to his wounds, but didn’t know who she was. “The girl, is she safe?” A man walked in after that he must have heard the question as he was the one to respond. “Don’t worry I knocked you out before you lost control again.” I only did that to save her, I didn’t want… I didn’t want… As he gripped the sheets tightly the person put a hand onto his shoulder. “You did well.” With those words the twisted feeling in his stomach was gone. He stood off the bed and went outside without another word, no thank you, just walked right out of the building.
 
 
Kyousuke was six when that all happened and as the years progressed he began to talk to the voices, trying to sort out one from another. They all had different personalities, but they were each able to keep me safe in different ways. One though he always avoided this voice had one purpose only to kill everything. Not talking to him kept him silent and let him hear the others more clearly. They each had their vices, but the boy would always preach to them about god and as he did so one by one they began to disappear until only one remained. Kyousuke was ten when he was left to his talks with the last voice. Ones whose only goal was to drive me over the edge. Kyousuke knew he would be difficult to talk to, as he continued to remind himof the things he had done or even seen. Every criminal act he watched one day Kyousuke had enough. “No more will I allow the innocent to be taken, no more will I watch idly with this strength.”  The voice grew quiet as Kyousuke made his way towards the castle. He noticed a family being tormented and stopped to look. He watched momentarily and began to channel his power. “This is my power and I will use even at the costs of my life!” “Raaaaaaagh!” He yelled moving forward with his own mind still intact. “Well run!” He said to the people as they watched him instead of fleeing their enemies. He raised his leg which grew before being sent into one of the men sending them skyward. With the spiritual training Kyousuke had done he also worked on his physical body. A strong soul requires a strong body. With one defeated only one more remained a man who was very familiar. He turned to run, but a large hand gripped him tightly. “Break him, kill him!” The other voice shouted from within the ninja’s head. Kyousuke began to crush the man’s arm he heard the bone break, but he then stopped. “You have one arm, you can learn to use your left or die. I have spared you twice, a third time will not happen.” With that the voice stopped for years as the boy stood and began to walk towards the castle. The family thanked him, but he continued forward. “I was just proving to that demon who I really am, no need to thank me.” 
 
 
Arriving at the gates Kyousuke was stopped by the guards. “I want to join the queens guard, I want to protect people, make this place better. Not just for me, but for others too.” The boy was escorted inside and thus began his training. He was introduced to the man who had saved him before. Even though he was not a member of the guard he was quite powerful. He was able to teach the basic jutsu necessary to become a low level shinobi. The skills that made an untrained fighter into an actual ninja, one capable of tactical thought and maneuvers not just swinging wildly and hoping to connect. Kyousuke realized if he had fought people like his trainer then he would have been dead long ago. As part of his training Kyousuke would frequently go out and bring back alive certain missing ninja who rebelled against the Queen and the princess. He brought each target back and with each one over the years he ascended to higher ranks and closer to his goal. On his last mission he was tasked to wipe out a band of missing nin who had taken up residence near the castle, they were planning to attack once they had a large enough force, but Kyousuke stopped that before anything bad could happen or so he had thought. While he was gone the princess was murdered and his former teacher as well. The seventeen year old was depressed for a time until a new queen rose in Akihana. Kyousuke vowed to defend her with his life.
 
 
With Den and Aki trying to make Hoshi a better place for all, Kyousuke was deployed to clear out many of the missing ninja. He went from one hideout to another gathering nature energy to keep himself going, with controlling the voices came learning how to use his other abilities as well. He knew he could recover his stamina faster than others and he used that to his advantage. His adrenaline pumped harder than others in a fight and he was given renewed vigor during each battle. There were many that took place in the beginning days of the village and Kyousuke found his way into many of them during the time. He spared as many as he could, but killed those who wouldn’t leave. He knew there weren’t enough places to keep all of those who didn’t leave and figured a quick death was more merciful than a slow one caused by famine and plague from a dungeon. After the village was clear and the ninja village was established Kyousuke was given the rank of jounin. A title he accepted with grace and a level of gratitude that he kept to himself.

 

Rank: Jounin

Village: Hoshigakure

Element(s): Lightning, Water, Earth

Specialties: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Medical

Clan: Jugo

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Stats
Healh: 40

Chakra: 10

Stamina: 20

Speed: 60

Strength: 70



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PostSubject: Re: Kyousuke Snow (Hoshi Contest)   Sat Jul 02, 2016 8:03 am


Approved <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3



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PostSubject: Re: Kyousuke Snow (Hoshi Contest)   Sat Jul 02, 2016 6:51 pm


Character on hold for a second review <3


You're awesome, give yourself a treat. <3



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PostSubject: Re: Kyousuke Snow (Hoshi Contest)   Sat Jul 02, 2016 10:17 pm

Few things, this character is supposed to be a model Hoshi shinobi, one that has been in Hoshi since it's creation. Your history has massive holes, you start in one village which is unknown, then due to a mission failure end up in the grass and stone country? Both of which never really existed in the nrpg canon, Iwa is the only one that showed up and existed, even then it never had shinobi and was destroyed to make Tengakure. So afterwards you spend a bunch of time in the desert and end up in Hoshi? (Hoshi/Haven has rolling fields and a beautiful camelot like landscape so idk how a desert connects unless you're going to suna.)

I need more clear and connecting events, the entire history is basically the torture scene by stone ninja, and then you liberating Hoshi, nothing else, it's all time skipped with implied events.

Also, you will not be able to be part of the Uchiha clan unless you start from Konoha. The Uchiha are the core clan that exists in the leaf, an Uchiha would not be found elsewhere unless drastic events occurred. Your family being shunned for not having the fire element, loss of an Agni Kai by one of your family members, something to that extent where they attempted migration away from the village, even then that part would be highly unlikely as the lead wouldn't want to give up soldiers.


The entire application needs to be rewritten in regular format, not narrative. Your personality for example has basically nothing, you have an entire paragraph rambling about people who steal Sharingan. All of it needs to be cleaned up and have clear information put in here so we can make this character live.


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Bloodline : Sage Transformation
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PostSubject: Re: Kyousuke Snow (Hoshi Contest)   Sun Jul 03, 2016 1:45 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kyousuke Snow (Hoshi Contest)   Sun Jul 03, 2016 6:07 am


Approved <3


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