Coming Storm (Private, Cloud Ashur)

Cloud looked into the air, before looking down onto the ground. "I brought you here to fight to the death, Ashur." Cloud said to his friend, looking over at him. It was obvious that the other ninja was much stronger than he was, but he wanted to prove to himself that he could fight him. Readying up for battle, Cloud glared at the other ninja. "I'm ready."

Ashur looked at Cloud unable to hear what he was hearing. He heard the battle though, and decided this would be the best thing he could do.
"Are you sure you want to fight to the death? That is pretty drastic, but I have only known you for a  few moments."
He met the boys eye and knew he was being serious. Ashur was going to start simple, and released Brandon from his pokeball. Brandon used Truly Toxic, and ran at Cloud at an alarming speed. Cloud would be punched in the neck by Brandon, and killed on impact unless blocked.

Cloud stopped. He felt a puncture in his neck, and it was all over. Looking over at Ashur as his vision blacked out, Cloud whispered a single phrase, that only Brandon and perhaps Ashur could here. "I was the extra cook. And the raikage was a dumbass. Fuck him up the ass for me."

Cloud is now dead.

Ashur's eyes widened as he saw Cloud was decapitated.
"JESUS! I thought you would dodge!"
Ashur began to jump around confused on what to do, then Brandon looked over at him as well.
"OH SHIT! I'm sorry I thought he would dodge!"
The two began to curse frantically and run around like the good ninja they were until Ashur stopped. and grabbed the body over his shoulder, Brandon grabbed the head, and the two walked back home feeling guilty. Ashur looked around, and decided to hide the body in his basement.

(Death of Cloud, and claiming Cloud's body.)

[Exit thread]

[Sorry guys, this is unreasonable, can't approve this. If you want to give Ashur your bloodline, then RP on it. If you want to get rid of the character, then retire him. If you want the suicide to be legit, then put effort and story into it. Ashur's own post implies that the characters barely know each other and that it makes no sense for them to have a fight to the death like this.]

I'm sorry for the inconvenience. Cloud and I were confused on the fastest way to get rid of his main for another main, and we decided to do a heavily rushed thread that left a sour taste to look at. Won't happen again.