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 Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken

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PostSubject: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Tue May 12, 2015 7:58 pm

Name: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken
Element: Wind
Rank: S
Spec Type: Ninjutsu

Backstory: 
An upgrade to the rasengan using wind release invented by Naruto Uzumaki. Its first form as a rasengan has a lot more power and even a cutting edge, doing damage with microscopic wind blades. The Rasenshuriken however,  is an extremely powerful technique, capable of destroying a person utterly. It removes the ability to use chakra as well as doing massive damage to the entire body.


Appearance: 
Wind Release: Rasengan is a sphere and has a radius of a quarter of a foot (7.62cm), just like the normal Rasengan. However it takes on the appearance of a swirling Fuma shuriken with a rasengan in the center.

The swirling ball within the Rasenshuriken is about half a foot in radius, and the four blades expand a meter and a half from the ball. The blades are actually fairly thick (for a 'blade' at least) and are 3.5 cms thick.


Handseals: 
Rasengan: N/A
Rasenshuriken: Raise hand

Duration: 

  • Rasengan: Can be held for up to 3 posts, jutsu ends when Rasengan is detonated


  • Rasenshuriken: User can hold Rasenshuriken for up to 2 posts, jutsu ends after it  explodes






If user doesn't hit anything before a duration ends, Rasengan/Rasenshuriken simply dissipates 

Cooldown: 

  • Rasengan: 3 posts after use


  • Rasenshuriken: 5 posts after use






Range: 

  • Rasengan: Self


  • Rasenshuriken: 70 meters






Power: 

  • Rasengan: 100


  • Rasenshuriken: Chakra stat






Speed: 

  • Rasengan: 100


  • Rasenshuriken: Chakra stat






Health: N/A
Stat Boosts: N/A

What it does: 

Any instance where the user gets assistance in forming the Rasengan or Rasenshuriken, AP cost is split evenly among the parties.

Wind Release: Rasengan

User can form the Rasengan in either hand. If the user has 70 chakra, requires a shadow clone or someone else to either use shape manipulation or nature manipulation (user cannot perform both because their chakra control isn't good enough). AP cost is split between both users, obviously if used with a non shadow clone user has to supply the nature chakra unless other person happens to also have Wind Release and this jutsu. Both users must be touching Rasengan (user can make it not explode when other person touches it) and both must know Rasengan.

At 80 Chakra user can perform the jutsu without aide, but can opt to use it as a combination jutsu if they wish. User can either have someone else use shape manipulation to assist them and they split AP cost, or user can upgrade a normal Rasengan to Wind Release by touching it and using half the AP required to use this jutsu.

User's Wind Release: Rasengan goes on cooldown even if they use it as a combination. If used to upgrade a normal Rasengan the other persons Rasengan will still go on cool down as well.

User can form two if they wish (one in each hand), however cool down is tripled and must spend AP cost for Both Rasengans. User can form second Rasengan at any point during the duration of the first.

This Rasengan is more potent than a normal Rasengan, forming at a base speed of 100 and having a base power of 100 before chakra scaling. 

When the user slams the Rasengan into something, the jutsu creates an explosion from the Rasengan, releasing wind blades into the object it hit.These blades will damage a persons body and muscles severly, redusing AP by 100, and strength and health by 10.

If the person being hit by the jutsu has more health than the jutsus power, but isn't immune (so less than 20 more health than power), instead of having the Rasengan rip through them it damages them in a circular radius twice that of the Rasengan. the being will be sent flying backwards at 100 speed, traveling 20 meters.

If the rasengan doesn't burst through the object/opponent, no blast is created. instead the wind slashes the flesh of the opponent, weakening it. Anyone without 20 more health than the jutsus power suffers -20 speed, -30 strength, and - 20 health in afflicted area (Speed because it will hurt to move, Health because flesh is cut up and damaged as well as the muscles in the area, and strength due to both).

Wind Release: Rasenshuriken

The Rasenshuriken is formed by the user raising their hand into the air. User cannot move while forming it (have to stand still or be in the middle of a jump, can't run and make it). Rasenshuriken forms at 75 speed, the chakra forming the rasengan in the middle then forming the blades. The creation is seamless, meaning as the rasengan is finished forming the blades form also. 

If the user only has 70 chakra, it requires 2 Shadow clones or two other people to help form it. One person (most likely user) must put Wind Release chakra into the jutsu, another must provide shape manipulation (must know Rasengan), and a third (who must know a Rasenshuriken jutsu) must provide further shape manipulation. AP cost is shared among all 3. 

At 80 chakra only requires one person to help with shape manipulation (must know Rasengan). AP cost is shared among both.

At 90 Chakra user can use Rasenshuriken by them self, but can have up to two people assist him in making it in order to split AP costs among each other. 


At 100 Chakra It can be thrown without Nature Energy being necessary.

The power of the Rasenshuriken becomes the average of the chakra of everyone who contributes AP. Only the primary user's skills and items that effect jutsu apply to the Rasenshuriken however, if any. 

After the Rasenhuriken if formed, user can either slam it into opponent or throw it. If it is slammed into an opponent (Without Nature energy, or 100 Chakra, it cannot be thrown) the recipient will take the full damage of the jutsu, in addition to losing 200 Ap if their health is lower then the Jutsu's power. Their chakra stat will drop by 20 due to the wind blades damage being much more potent, but not as effective as the thrown variant. The user will lose 10 points in chakra, and this will increase by 10 with every use. (Next use would be 20, then 30 etc.

If thrown, Rasenshuriken is propelled by users chakra , moving at their chakra stat.. This alone makes the jutsu deadly, as it can potentially move at high speeds that some cannot dodge. The Rasenshuriken can travel a total of 70 meters, and can only move in a straight line once thrown. The user, or any form of shadow clone of theirs, can grab onto the rasengan part of the rasenshuriken even after it has been thrown. When the Rasenshuriken is caught it can be thrown again at the same distance, and the duration resets. Rasenshuriken can only be caught 2 times. Catching the Rasenshuriken costs 30 AP.

The blades of the rasenshuriken are sharp wind blades, with their sharpness being the users chakra stat. Even being grazed by these blades does damage, and will reduce strength and chakra by 5. This does not stack with the full explosion.


When the jutsu detonates, the ball in the center of the rasenshuriken explodes, sending out the microscopic wind blades in a powerful 50 meter explosion. If you are hit by the full brunt of the blast, you will lose 500 AP from the damage to yout muscles, as well as having a drop in strength of 30. Your chakra stat on the other hand, will be dropped to 0 should you survive. There is no medical jutsu capable of repairing them at this point. Due to new advances in medical jutsu, it is possible to recover but the healing is rigorous. You must spend time letting your body heal and the chakra centers of your body come to some sort of healed state. After 40 hospital posts (Can be done in multiple topics) you can retrain your chakra stat.


If slammed into an opponent, jutsu will attach itself to the opponent and send them flying backwards at users chakra stat until the user detonates the jutsu or it reaches the max distance and detonates itself. Target will be slashed up by the wind blades nearly instantly. however, If they do survive, the Rasengan in the center of the rasenshuriken will hold whatever part of the body it latches onto with a power of the users chakra stat until the jutsu detonates.

If user is a full sage, upon doing so Rasenshuriken gains 10 meters to range, 5 meters to explosion radius.

If one is immune to damage they are immune to chakra destruction by wind blades.


If AP goes below 0 due to this tech, instead of a knockout it is fatal


Character Specific:
Wordcount to learn: 
Wind Release: Rasengan/5,000 words
Wind Release: Rasenshuriken/3,000 words after learning Wind Rasengan.
Action Cost: 
60 AP for Wind Release: Rasengan
150 for Rasenshuriken 
Mastery: N/A
Bonus Requirements: 
Wind Release first element.
Sage Mode (Thrown Variant, unless meeting Chakra standards described above)
Sage Transformation as long as it has "Sage Chakra Transfer" (Thrown Variant, unless meeting described standards above)
Canon or Custom: Canon Also Canon


Health: 35
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 60
Speed: 100
Strength: 30
AP: 843
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Tue May 12, 2015 8:15 pm

Bit iffy on base sage transformation being considered as all that's needed to improve jutsu with Nature chakra.

I'll make a jutsu like one jugo used in the manga, and have one of the benefits being that you can infuse nature energy into jutsu. So for now just remove Sage Transformation from the reqs, everything else is alright (I'd still like something for the chakra destroying affect like 'those with more health than jutsu power are immune to this effect' or something like that).
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Tue May 12, 2015 8:30 pm

I sort of Disagree. Jugo was able to make a sage mode Susanoo just by touching it, and in The BL itself you passively gain sage energy, which is all you need to throw it.

As for the immunity, its main effect is chakra destruction. It wouldnt make sense for one of its main effects to be able to be immune to. As I said, id rather this be a limited due to its effects shown in the series, being able to damage the likes of the ten tails and Madara Uchiha.


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Speed: 100
Strength: 30
AP: 843
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Tue May 12, 2015 8:36 pm

All of juugo's abilities aren't tied into the base bloodline. Base bloodline allows you to gather nature energy to increase your reserves and enhance your body, but makes 0 mention of improving jutsu.

It makes sense for someone who is more durable than a technique is strong to be resistant to internal damage the jutsu wouldn't be able to cause. I realize there are microscopic wind blades and what not but having a jutsu effect that causes damage but has no resist stat mucho op

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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Tue May 12, 2015 9:08 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Sat Mar 26, 2016 5:00 am

Didn't realize 'basically the same' as my Rasenshuriken that moves has chakra stat for speed meant you were adding a whole other stat calculation to the jutsus speed.

Make it either throwing speed or chakra stat. It can't be both as it's way to easy to hit 300 speed that way...
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Sat Apr 02, 2016 9:06 pm

Can I have it as "one or the other, whichever is higher"?


Health: 35
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 60
Speed: 100
Strength: 30
AP: 843
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Sat Apr 02, 2016 9:13 pm

Can I have it as "one or the other, whichever is higher"?


Health: 35
Chakra: 100
Stamina: 60
Speed: 100
Strength: 30
AP: 843
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Fri May 27, 2016 2:02 pm

Keep it as chakra speed

Add something where being grazed by the Rasenshuriken doesn't stack with the stat loss you get from a direct hit.

State a medical jutsu with higher power than the Rasenshuriken can restore the persons chakra system and remove the bit about soul amethyst.

add to the part about 200 AP loss that it only happens if their health is less than jutsu power. Because right now parts read 'they take damage AND lose AP' which doesn't make it clear if the ap loss has a resist or not.
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PostSubject: Re: Wind Release: Rasengan/Rasenshuriken   Fri May 27, 2016 2:25 pm

Other edits are fine except med jutsu one
From wiki, "The wind blades damage anything within the vortex on a cellular level, attacking the chakra circulatory system to such a degree that no amount of medical ninjutsu can heal it."

At this point to even use it it requires wind style is your main, you have the extremely rare Juugo bloodline or are in Sage mode or ISM. Apart from making it a limited  (which i wouldnt be against) i have no idea how to balance its main threat from canon


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Strength: 30
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