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 Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)

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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Sun Aug 12, 2012 11:07 pm

Saru continued to travel in his chair, only a few more feet until he would leave his cloud. Apparently it had taken some time for the clone to escape from his little solid trap using a jutsu which had apparently created solid chakra, making it rather impossible for the mist to get anywhere on his body. Though, this had also blocked any oxygen apparently. The clone had began to move away from Saru, and occasionally back towards him, although he was still rather far away. The clone had been blowing out fire while the chakra barrier was still up, the solid chakra barrier, it had been most likely that the clone was dooming itself, as the fire would most likely have stopped at the chakla barrier and burnt the clone instead of aiming at the target, this being due to the fact that it could stop the dark mist, clouds, or smoke, though it could be wrong. Though Saru had no idea on what had been happening, he had assumed that the clone had been disposed of. Saru moved in the opposite direction of where the real Navi was, as the clone moved more towards Navi in it's search for Saru. In the darkness, it was nearly impossible to see now, due to the way Saru had manipulated it.


Saru continued traveling away from the clone, as the darkness moved in the opposite direction of Saru. He would begin to walk through the tree branches, sighing, he had somewhat hoped this place was going to be different, however it hadn't been. Just like everywhere he had gone he was unwanted, he cursed the day he was born as the clone inside the darkness would continue to constantly use up the ninty nine percent of the user's chakra he had put in there, making it seem as if, to Byakugan and Sharingan users that the originally shinobi would have been the clone, due to how much chakra he had given the clone. The blades inside useless due to the fact that the clone had the chakra around him, it was rather too powerful for the blades, they would break on contact, though not many of the army of blades in there touched the clone. The darkness moved away from Saru to throw it off of Saru's trail. He continued to travel to the next place on the list to see where he would be wanted, Kumogakure.

[Mod permission to vague manip how much chakra you had put into your clone, due to the fact that you hadn't stated how much you put in it. Mod also approved of the way I destroyed your clone, due to the fact that you said my mist wouldn't go through your chakra, your fire wouldn't go through either.]
[EXIT, hopefully.]
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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Mon Aug 13, 2012 9:46 pm

[[13:16:18] @ Chris Kees : breathing fire with chakra cloak on sounds okay,
Talked in chatbox and explained logic of it, I'm going to void that part about my clone being destroyed^]

Navi himself rubbed his watery eye. Somehow from over 300 feet away a random projectile had cut him, giving him an extremely shallow paper cut on his eye. The cut did not hit the pupil or other major area to cause any serious damage, but it would be difficult to see out of that eye for a minute or two. He would be careful to dodge any other projectiles that might come. The rest of this fight would come down to his clone.


Navi's clone had used up a fairly large portion of (Navi's) chakra blowing his fire jutsu through the cloud, attempting to blindly hit Saru. Navi's clone couldn't be harmed with his raven style aura, but he was wasting chakra in his current state. The cloud was too dark to see through. Navi's Clone used his raven-style wings to fly swiftly upwards until he surfaced above the cloud. Without him realizing it, the cloud was being moved away, back towards Navi's real position. Navi's clone spotted Saru far below him, and saw that Saru had exited the cloud and was escaping. Saru had bought himself some time and space, but Navi's clone was far faster then Saru and would easily be able to catch up. Navi's Clone swooped down to catch up with Saru with his wings, being sure to steer completely clear of the cloud. Navi's clone was prepared to dodge any other attacks by using simple evasive maneuvers and flying out of the way, just in case. Saru wouldn't know that Navi's clone was swooping down silently, and with any luck it would be too late for him to react to Navi's Clone's attack. When Navi's Clone was only a few meters away behind Saru and still in middair, he performed the handsigns for another fire jutsu. Another plume of fire bursted from his lips as he aimed his Dragon Fire jutsu at Saru.

Saru was clever and would not likely be killed. However, Navi's Clone's jutsu was still deadly, especially while he was surrounded by Raven Style chakra. Even if Saru managed to escape, he would most likely be left with a few burns to remember Navi by.



To change the convictions of a vengeful God, to ensure balance to the ninja world, and to end this Angel of Death...
The death of the right man was all that was necessary.


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http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t23190-navi-yamaki-stats-v6-wip#175086
http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t10341-navi-s-stats#83978
"The last thing you witnessed was the descent of an Angel, and your life ended in a crimson flash."

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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Tue Aug 14, 2012 2:20 pm

Saru continued to travel through the branches of the trees, he sighed, thinking. He would need to use strategy to keep away from the shinobi, or kill him, though he did not prefer killing the shinobi unless he absolutely needed to. He would hide in the leaves, the shinobi's clone apparently still looking through the cloud, he would perform a simple set of hand signs and a clone would appear silently, he would launch it in the direction he was moving in and begin to travel through the leaves slowly, and unnoticed. Though with the cloud of darkness headed towards the original shinobi's position, it would be possible for the clone to still be looking in there. The darkness was six hundred feet wide, three hundred from the position Saru was at, three hundred to each side anyways. As the clone came out of the darkness, Saru unaware, the original had been executed by the remaining blades in the darkness, it would not be too long until the clone would disappear. The original had a blade to the head, it had cut through to the brain, and came out the other side, he also had a blade which cut through the chest and stopped at the heart, though he didn't choose to move. The man was actually sitting near the edge of the dark cloud, due to the blade earlier that had been launched from Saru's old position, though Sary didn't know it, actually hit the original shinobi. The clone of Navi's would soon disappear, and Saru still led his clone in that direction and he would for another while or so, as the soon to be gone clone of Navi's chased it. Saru watched, silently as his clone was chased, though it wouldn't be too long until the clone be destroyed and the shinobi's apparent clone could possibly head Saru's way. He prepared another clone, which headed back in the direction of the dark clouds.


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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:41 pm



WHOLE TOPIC
[15:36:16] @ LostLegend : If it was a minor edit he can remain using it
[15:36:31] @ LostLegend : But if it changed a lot of the jutsu eg the element, range, etc then no


[15:42:31] @ Chris Kees : Topic ceases to exist
[15:42:35] @ Chris Kees : Both Shinobi live on
[15:42:36] @ Chris Kees : >_>



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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Tue Aug 14, 2012 9:45 pm

[So basically we're voiding this whole thing. We never met eachother and nothing every occured. Its as if this whole topic never existed. Got it.]


To change the convictions of a vengeful God, to ensure balance to the ninja world, and to end this Angel of Death...
The death of the right man was all that was necessary.


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http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t23190-navi-yamaki-stats-v6-wip#175086
http://naruto-role-play-rpg.forumotion.com/t10341-navi-s-stats#83978
"The last thing you witnessed was the descent of an Angel, and your life ended in a crimson flash."

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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Tue Aug 14, 2012 11:51 pm

Confirming the void.


Now I'm invincible~


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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:10 am

There is little reasn to void the entire topic. Simply cycling back to before the jutsu was used will do, and he can use it from that point with its edited stats.
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PostSubject: Re: Hidden in the Leaves of the Forest. (PRIVATE)   Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:24 am

That is a matter of rewinding the entire topic more or less, his clan is also under review currently due to other things needing to be changed.
So Lost, I request this to remain voided due to the fact his clan is gonna change even more, so to avoid arguments this would be for the best since there is still stuff wrong with it that slipped through approval.


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